Zyiesha

A ball of energy, is what you are.
 And a beautiful, young lady by far.

A smile, so bright you light up the room.
 I miss you so much, and hope to see you REAL soon.

I'm so glad you came into my life.
 I wouldn't have met you, if I wasn't your father's wife.

I feel just like you are my own child, 
 You're so sweet and loving, as well as meek and mild.

No matter what your father and I have gone through, 
 I want you to know I will always have a Mother's love for you.




*To my daughter from another Mother even though she calls me "Mommy Aleera" too I love it!*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 4/18/2009 10:48:00 AM
Wonderful tribute to a little girl with an awesome name !! Great writing, Aleera!!
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Date: 4/17/2009 1:49:00 AM
A ball of energy, nice description and great work...Raul
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Date: 4/16/2009 4:20:00 PM
Thank you Aleera for your sweet comments about my poem I can tell you are a good mother by reading your poem Zyiesha, it is a very sweet poem, and has a mother's love written al over it,All three of my children are grown and gone out on their own, but I have two percious grand babies, and I tell my children all the time, please be very careful who you leave you children with because no on loves your children or are going to take care of them like they do except me and their grandfather.
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Date: 4/16/2009 11:55:00 AM
When I held my first daughter the first time comes flooding to me as I read this ... from one father to another ... I drink to the joy divine.
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Date: 4/16/2009 9:09:00 AM
Very loving and heartfelt, Aleera. You don't have to a girl's birth mother to feel a strong tie to her. In fact, your admiration and love for her is especially commendable because you opened up your heart and welcomed her into your life. Sweet tribute! I hope you have shown this to her. She sounds like a wonderful child! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/16/2009 7:15:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL. Pls consider it Lyric as well. When you're done with the fifth stanza repeat the fifth twice then sing the forth stanza, and third, and second, and lastly sing the first....CREATE YOUR FIRST ALBUM. I with you all the best.
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