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Krill in abundance, Shrimp like creatures bloom oceans; Blue whales scoop and sieve.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 6/1/2009 6:41:00 AM
such a nice haiku on sea life, could picture those blue whales having their fill ;)
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Date: 5/25/2009 12:27:00 AM
James, I love nature. You have captured nature in Haiku. Beautiful. Lovingly, Dane
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Date: 5/24/2009 5:28:00 PM
your use of the right vocabulary makes this haiku work very well. if you were to change even one word this haiku would lose its beauty. great write!!!
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Date: 5/24/2009 1:12:00 PM
Though I haven't encountered a whale in the Gulf of Mexico, your description gives me a great image of nature's creatures at work. Very nice, James! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2009 12:54:00 PM
the ocean is a beautiful work of art as is this poem
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Date: 5/24/2009 12:26:00 PM
Hi Scotsman! another great seaworthy poem!! Jim
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