Zooplankton

Krill in abundance, Shrimp like creatures bloom oceans; Blue whales scoop and sieve.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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K. Avatar
June 1, 2009 at 6:41 AM
such a nice haiku on sea life, could picture those blue whales having their fill ;)
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May 25, 2009 at 12:27 AM
James, I love nature. You have captured nature in Haiku. Beautiful. Lovingly, Dane
Presson Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 5:28 PM
your use of the right vocabulary makes this haiku work very well. if you were to change even one word this haiku would lose its beauty. great write!!!
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May 24, 2009 at 1:12 PM
Though I haven't encountered a whale in the Gulf of Mexico, your description gives me a great image of nature's creatures at work. Very nice, James! Love, Carolyn
Megens Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 12:54 PM
the ocean is a beautiful work of art as is this poem
Goff Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 12:26 PM
Hi Scotsman! another great seaworthy poem!! Jim
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