Zooming About

Beep beep as the car drives past
Zooming around so very fast
Wow, Look at him go
Sorry, but no time to stop or go slow!

Whoosh whoosh as the airplane fly’s by
White tracks in the sky as it fly’s high
Where will it go?
A place so cold where it will start to snow!?

Brum brum as the motorbike roars around
Makes a loud noise with its engine sound
Look at all the clothes he has to wear.
And the big hat that covers his hair!

Choo choo as the train passes town
It reaches the station and slows down
It’s long and carries lots of girls and boys
As it moves off it makes such a noise!

Splash splash as the boat skims the sea
Bobbing along, it’s fun you’ll have to agree!
Look at her fishing with her pretty blue rod 
She may catch a shark!..or maybe a cod!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:37 PM
Congrats on the win, Gareth
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:06 PM
Fun rhymes, Gareth! Congrats on your HM. LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 10:35 AM
My congratulations to you Gareth on your win in Joe Flach's contest "One For the Kiddies". Love, Carol
Flach Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:57 AM
Gareth, this is a fun and enjoyable read that really hit the target with the contest theme. The use of sound words (onomatopea?) is a great technique with the kiddies and makes for a fun read that they can play along with. Thank you for entering this fun poem in my contest. Joe
Fraser Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 7:34 AM
Many congratulations Gareth on your win in the contest with this wonderful rhyme >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 4:16 AM
A well deserved win, gareth
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 3:52 PM
This was very inventive and great fun to read. I think children would adore it. Congratulations on your win Gareth! Aloha, Connie
Sweetheart Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 2:01 PM
Congrats Gareth on your HM in Joe's contest today.. enjoyed and u enjoy your special honor too.my friend..with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 5:55 PM
Hey was this for the travel contest or the kiddie contest. Gosh, it is so versatile I can see it in BOTH contests!! Luv, Andrea
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