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Zooming About

Beep beep as the car drives past Zooming around so very fast Wow, Look at him go Sorry, but no time to stop or go slow! Whoosh whoosh as the airplane fly’s by White tracks in the sky as it fly’s high Where will it go? A place so cold where it will start to snow!? Brum brum as the motorbike roars around Makes a loud noise with its engine sound Look at all the clothes he has to wear. And the big hat that covers his hair! Choo choo as the train passes town It reaches the station and slows down It’s long and carries lots of girls and boys As it moves off it makes such a noise! Splash splash as the boat skims the sea Bobbing along, it’s fun you’ll have to agree! Look at her fishing with her pretty blue rod She may catch a shark!..or maybe a cod!

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Date: 8/16/2010 8:37:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Gareth
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Date: 8/16/2010 8:06:00 PM
Fun rhymes, Gareth! Congrats on your HM. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:35:00 AM
My congratulations to you Gareth on your win in Joe Flach's contest "One For the Kiddies". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2010 9:57:00 AM
Gareth, this is a fun and enjoyable read that really hit the target with the contest theme. The use of sound words (onomatopea?) is a great technique with the kiddies and makes for a fun read that they can play along with. Thank you for entering this fun poem in my contest. Joe
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Date: 8/14/2010 7:34:00 AM
Many congratulations Gareth on your win in the contest with this wonderful rhyme >> James
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Date: 8/14/2010 4:16:00 AM
A well deserved win, gareth
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Date: 8/13/2010 3:52:00 PM
This was very inventive and great fun to read. I think children would adore it. Congratulations on your win Gareth! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/13/2010 2:01:00 PM
Congrats Gareth on your HM in Joe's contest today.. enjoyed and u enjoy your special honor too.my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 5:55:00 PM
Hey was this for the travel contest or the kiddie contest. Gosh, it is so versatile I can see it in BOTH contests!! Luv, Andrea
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