Zoo

Took the kids to the Petting Zoo. All the tame animals came through. While I was standing watching the monkeys And chimpanzees there in the few trees I felt something tugging at me; I turned around to see A goat eat-ding my tee-shirt. I shrieked, walk backwards, fell to the dirt. Standing intently beside me, the giraffe Stretch out its long tongue with a laugh. Out of my skin cut and scraped, I shout, Crawl on my hands, as I was tensely strung -out, Stole my bag of buttered popcorn. Crawling backwards dirt-borne, Screaming, flapping my arms in the air. Everyone stood to stare, Laughing everywhere. 11/28/2020
Make Me Laugh With Some Humor - Any Form - New Poems Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Allison Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 12:37 PM
thanks for the giggles my friend, many congrats on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Goldsmith Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on the win. What a story/write. Bet it was not funny then but is now funny to you. If only you had pictures. Enjoy your win with blessings...................
Edmonds  Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 6:49 AM
Congratulations on the win with this delightful, humorous poem. How I would have loved to have observed the entertainment in the zoo that day. Well done... Belle
Canerdy Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 6:40 AM
Eve, CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
Kerr Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 12:56 AM
Happy Monday Eve, Well done on your deserved win in this contest. Superb wit. Thanks for your soupmail drop in regarding my selection. Best Wishes Howard
Callus Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 12:34 AM
Oh dear...sometimes when it rains it really pours! That is quite an entertaining poem, Eve:) Congratulations on your fine win. Wishing you a Merry & Blessed Christmas. Hugs // paul
Dietrich Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 6:24 PM
wow, that was sure a funny scene you painted. Hopefully all imagined!! Congrats, Eve.
Roper Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 11:26 AM
All imagined. Remembering other situations when children are confronted with this issue and are scared. Thank you for the congrats. Hugs
Y. Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 3:02 PM
Hi Even, This is hilarious! Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
Kitchin Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 3:48 AM
Eve, congratulations on your winning placement with your cute and funny poem!
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 3:04 PM
Such a humour-dripping poem, Eve!! I feel this piece has the shape of a mouth with smile on it!!
Buhagiar Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 12:16 PM
Hapy hour at the zoo. Funny poem. ~~
Watt Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 11:51 PM
Eve, you made me laugh with the antics of those petting zoo animals! I remember my kids having some tense moments in the petting zoo back in the day! Wishing you all the best in the contest ~ John
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace