Zone Out

Feel free to zone out of your comfort zone
Even in a loud crowd, I feel oh so alone
I'm crawling out of my rainbow shell
Deep down, I'll show you a heaven and a hell

Blankets of benevolence smothers me at nightfall 
I'm trying to get on the ball and all...before I make a mighty fall...
Believe me, I've been trying to stay positive
I give you a lovely life to truly, sincerely live.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 29, 2018 at 2:37 AM
Your pain is echoed out in the loudspeaker of your creativity mr. Earnings! I can totally relate and of course look forward to reading more!
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March 30, 2018 at 6:29 PM
:) Awesome way of commenting on my poem. Hehe. Creativity is rewarded through all aspects of my life. -JWE
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