Zone Out

Feel free to zone out of your comfort zone Even in a loud crowd, I feel oh so alone I'm crawling out of my rainbow shell Deep down, I'll show you a heaven and a hell Blankets of benevolence smothers me at nightfall I'm trying to get on the ball and all...before I make a mighty fall... Believe me, I've been trying to stay positive I give you a lovely life to truly, sincerely live.

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Kyle Kriticos

Date: 3/29/2018 2:37:00 AM

Your pain is echoed out in the loudspeaker of your creativity mr. Earnings! I can totally relate and of course look forward to reading more!

J.W. Earnings
Date: 3/30/2018 6:29:00 PM

:) Awesome way of commenting on my poem. Hehe. Creativity is rewarded through all aspects of my life. -JWE