Zona Man

Hope Zona Man's okay, didn't get an overdose of pricks Uh please excuse, cactus thorns, sharp pointy things, oh fiddlesticks Let's just call them tiny daggers Making JJ scream and stagger Just wrap him up in swaddling clothes, this raving lunatic

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Silent One

Date: 1/27/2018 10:27:00 AM

Now that is mean lol

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/27/2018 11:04:00 AM

Can say anything to John John and he laughs uncontrollably! He's been given a leave of absence from the funny farm! (apologies dear JJ my long time amigo!)

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/25/2018 8:29:00 AM

Oh dear me I'm exposed!//Got pricklies all through my toes//Me and Mick Jagger//We've got the swagger//In Zona, a cholla's a rose. PRICKLE ON PICKLE JACK!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/25/2018 8:35:00 AM

Well hello to you and Lick Yagger??? lol I send you a dozen chollas!! ??????

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/25/2018 7:49:00 AM

I have no idea who you're talking about but am amused none the less xomo ;)

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/25/2018 8:05:00 AM

It's about our friend John John (John Wulf/Lim'rik flats) who's wintering in Arizona!!! The jig is up!!! xxx