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Zodiac Me

Alive with a commanding presence Really, at everything I must be the best I believe myself to be a strong person Especially when compared to the rest So just please accept me as I am, for I am but a Ram

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Amy Swanson

Date: 2/13/2009 9:44:00 AM

Great astrological acrostic! Aries people are wonderful and fun, I've had the privilege to know a few. Sounds just like them! :) Loved it, good luck in the contest. ~~ From a fellow fire sign! (Leo) Amy :)

Arany P.

Date: 2/9/2009 6:55:00 AM

great one... aries! best wishes with the contest! ~ Arany

Monique Davis

Date: 2/8/2009 2:09:00 PM

LOL. GO ARIES!!!!!! Beautifully written to describe an Aries to those that don't understand us. I love it.- Monique

Sandy Jamison

Date: 2/8/2009 5:33:00 AM

Thank you for your comment. This is a great poem. Ilove astrology. Sandy

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 2/7/2009 3:40:00 AM

I, too know what it's like to be a perfectionist, that's an aquarian trait as well, well done Aries man! Love, Kristin

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 2/6/2009 12:58:00 PM

Have to smile at this, the Ram at the top of the heap...nice poem. Acrostics can be real fun. Thank you for comments on my newest villanelle. It wasn't an easy form, but once I got into it, it seemed to gather it's own momentum. thank you again, your comments are always heartfelt and I welcome them all. ~Tru

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/6/2009 12:51:00 PM

Good piece of work, but is it really true, it is a hard slot to want to be the best, alot of pressure! Déirdre

Date: 2/6/2009 12:47:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one. So you're the best--at least you've got that self confidence going. I'll gladly accept you as you are--a talented writer. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Have a nice day. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/6/2009 12:19:00 PM

I have an arian heart too, sometimes I have to stand alone fighting my wars. Great work...Raul