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I wish we all had a body with a zip For when we need a replacement hip The body is unzipped to replace a new part A liver or kidney, a lung or new heart Bones are removed and replaced as required No need for traction or bones that are wired The days will be gone for all operations This will catch on with all the nations Order on-line or a big shop will do To buy a spare body part just for you No need to worry, no need to fuss Decide what you need and catch the bus Tesco’s and Asda can sell the bits you need They will grow organic body parts from a seed So bear that in mind if you are an inventor A brain needs inventing that doesn’t get dementia

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/14/2011 2:09:00 PM
Cute! Ellen
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Date: 10/27/2009 2:19:00 PM
Very neat concept with a stinger last line ... very unique writing ... keep on ... thankxxx for your comments on my poetry posted today ... appreciate your input ... Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/27/2009 12:47:00 PM
Made me chuckle a little Pamela, nicely rhymed >> James
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Date: 10/27/2009 11:07:00 AM
Pamela - a lovely poem and I wish we could do this I'd be straight down to the shops to get a new foot as I suffer from plantar fasciitis!!! Regards Janette
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Date: 10/26/2009 2:43:00 PM
LOL wonderful write here, Pamela !!
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Date: 10/25/2009 8:11:00 PM
Very clever and very cool! I could use a few replacement parts right now (including my brain!) - Tim
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Date: 10/25/2009 6:45:00 PM
Cool thought, Smile, Sincerely Moses
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