Zion

All Beauty Calls Delight. Every Freeman Grows Heavenward Inspiring Justice, Keeping Lilliputian Mentalities Natal, Ordering Procreation, Qualifying Rare Synthesises Toward Universal Visitations, Wandering Xanadu, Yearning…. Zion.

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 11/10/2011 6:05:00 PM

I DiGG :) what you did with this ABC poem. This is one of the forms I tried. I do enjoy this ABC form. For some reason, it came somewhat naturally! Thank you for your words of wisdom. Please do help if you can, or have time. All my poems just come out, VERY quickly! I never edit them or change them for fear of messing up the natural feeling of the moment. I do think this limits me literary circles of conventional form. I came to this site for practice and education in expanding my horizons.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/7/2011 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Moses' sponsored contest "Natures Bounty" Debbie. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/7/2011 8:54:00 AM

Congratulations, Debbie! You came up with some amazing words in this challenge...I was thinkiing of Zion National Park, until I read which Zion you meant!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/6/2011 10:26:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on an outstanding win with this ABC entry of profound words luv.. glad all is well too...here too.. yeah..luv..

John Freeman

Date: 11/6/2011 6:59:00 PM

Up Zion hill I trod, looking toward a precept I call God. A great idea for an ABC recital Deb. Congratulations on your worthy entry. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2011 11:10:00 PM

debs, you have your life's philosophies in this little ABC poem. It's interesting to see how people are doing them!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/27/2011 9:54:00 AM

Brilliant!!

Jack Horne

Date: 10/27/2011 8:30:00 AM

LOL, love 'eXact'! Lovely write, Debs

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 10/27/2011 6:38:00 AM

These are hard to do, and still make sense. I have tackled the form a few times myself. Pretty good going, Debbie!

Don Johnson

Date: 10/26/2011 9:40:00 PM

Great little poem BABE! thanks for me no 10 place, keeps me ego in place, then:) on ya babe....