Zilch, That Is What I Got

The Christmas tree was brightly lit
 But the star on top someone forgot
 But that's not all they did omit
 St Nick must have been in on the plot
 Because, zilch, that is what I got
                        --
 10/7/17
 Contest: It's the End of the Forms Series
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Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 12:00 PM
this is AWESOME, Joseph. Love how you did that theme, I chose it too but in a different way! BIG congrats.
Callus Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 10:24 AM
What a shame, Joseph!:) ... but this poem made up for it because you got a fine result! Congratulations! Regards // paul
Barden Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 12:22 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win, Joseph ... blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
May Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 4:16 AM
Thank you Gregory
Roper Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Congratulations on your win, Joseph. we had a lot of those growing up. :( Hugs Eve ~`*
May Avatar
October 10, 2017 at 4:16 AM
Thank you Eve
Sands Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Congratulations Joseph! :)
May Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 6:34 PM
Thank you Heidi
La France Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 2:00 PM
Joseph, I really liked your limerick, congratulations on your win in my contest ~
May Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Thank you for my placement BW
Ashley Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 9:15 PM
A wonderful, witty write Joseph. Good luck in the contest!
May Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 9:22 PM
Thank you Susan
Pandit Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 8:59 PM
Very creative, as always--best for a win Joseph!
May Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 9:22 PM
Thank you Vijay
Vaso Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 8:54 PM
That's so funny, loved this!
May Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 9:21 PM
Thank you Arthur
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 7:55 PM
I hope St Nick doesn't nick your pressies this year Jospeh!:-) hugs jan xx
May Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 7:56 PM
haha..Thank you Jan...hugs
Sands Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 7:53 PM
St. Nick wasn't very nice Joseph. Good one. Good luck in the contest :)
May Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 7:56 PM
Thank you Heidi
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