Zilch

Tin Man

Stoop shouldered,
head down,
shuffling.
Just “kicking the can”
down the road.
Casting no shadow,
lost in a lie’s
intransigence,
following
the tinny sound
of an empty can.


10/5/2017

submitted to – It’s The End Of The Forms Series – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Broken Wings

theme - ZILCH
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Ashley Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Wow! An awesome write John. Amazing imagery. A somber and intriguing portrayal of an lonely, empty man. Enjoyed and good luck in the contest!
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2017 at 7:59 AM
You portray him superbly, he sounds broken and dejected John - great imagery! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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