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Zilch

Tin Man Stoop shouldered, head down, shuffling. Just “kicking the can” down the road. Casting no shadow, lost in a lie’s intransigence, following the tinny sound of an empty can. 10/5/2017 submitted to – It’s The End Of The Forms Series – Poetry Contest sponsor – Broken Wings theme - ZILCH

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Date: 10/5/2017 7:57:00 PM
Wow! An awesome write John. Amazing imagery. A somber and intriguing portrayal of an lonely, empty man. Enjoyed and good luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/5/2017 7:59:00 AM
You portray him superbly, he sounds broken and dejected John - great imagery! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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