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Zilch

"Vi træffes der, min Ven!" Solvejgs sang*

once after eons
we'll meet there again my friend -
time's zilch for lovers 

9/3/2019
Maureen McGreavy’s Sing Me A Senryu Poetry Contest
Favorite song: Solveig's Song by Edvard Grieg 
https://youtu.be/n3SyreMN7y8

* (nor.) "We'll meet there again, my friend!" Solveig's Song

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/7/2019 7:17:00 PM Lovely job you did here. I see you got a win. congrats! I got "zilch" haha Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/7/2019 3:17:00 PM So beautiful!! Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 10/5/2019 9:45:00 AM Not familiar with the song but your senryu says so much. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 10/3/2019 5:12:00 PM Kurt congratulations on your win in the contest! Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 10/3/2019 4:25:00 PM Congrats on your win, Kurt. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/3/2019 2:23:00 PM Indeed, time does not count for those who are in love, Kurt! I love the haunting song you chose. Congratulations on your win. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 10/3/2019 2:16:00 PM I love the sentiment in your words Kurt as you took me to eons from now. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/3/2019 9:31:00 AM Really enjoy this one. Thank you Kurt. Congratulations on your win. xomo Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 9/27/2019 1:28:00 AM Kurt, we miss you! come back! It has been three weeks! Thank you for writing this one. Maybe you are storing some new poems up? And you will serenade us with an avalanche of poems soon? Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/24/2019 6:14:00 PM Where are you Kurt? I hope you are enjoying a vacation. I look forward to your next poem. Aloha, Connie : ) xxoo Login to Reply

Robert Lindley Date: 9/13/2019 1:40:00 PM Your depths in verse awe me my friend. This has that in spades and its beauty is enhanced by its author's poetic genius... A fav... Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/4/2019 6:34:00 PM Rather amazing! ... I'm going to go out on a long tree limb here and predict that you'll be the ONLY contest entrant whose song is by Edvard Grieg. Whatcha think? ~ gw Login to Reply Gershon Wolf Date: 9/16/2019 9:45:00 PM Hey, please see soup mail. Thanks! Kurt Ravidas Date: 9/5/2019 8:39:00 AM The song is fantasic but this is not a song contest. I think I'll lose: the poem is not pretty good)

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/4/2019 5:16:00 PM Cool one! Uniqueness is you! Kim Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/3/2019 1:33:00 PM This is beautiful Kurt! : ) xxoo Login to Reply