Zilch

"Vi træffes der, min Ven!" Solvejgs sang*

once after eons
we'll meet there again my friend -
time's zilch for lovers 

9/3/2019
Maureen McGreavy’s Sing Me A Senryu Poetry Contest
Favorite song: Solveig's Song by Edvard Grieg 
https://youtu.be/n3SyreMN7y8

* (nor.) "We'll meet there again, my friend!" Solveig's Song

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Andrea Dietrich

October 7, 2019 at 7:17 PM

Lovely job you did here. I see you got a win. congrats! I got "zilch" haha

Kim Rodrigues

October 7, 2019 at 3:17 PM

So beautiful!!

James Inman

October 5, 2019 at 9:45 AM

Not familiar with the song but your senryu says so much.

Constance La France

October 3, 2019 at 5:12 PM

Kurt congratulations on your win in the contest!

Line Gauthier

October 3, 2019 at 4:25 PM

Congrats on your win, Kurt.

Paul Callus

October 3, 2019 at 2:23 PM

Indeed, time does not count for those who are in love, Kurt! I love the haunting song you chose. Congratulations on your win. Regards // paul

Jeanne Mcgee

October 3, 2019 at 2:16 PM

I love the sentiment in your words Kurt as you took me to eons from now. Congrats on your win.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 3, 2019 at 9:31 AM

Really enjoy this one. Thank you Kurt. Congratulations on your win. xomo

Caren Krutsinger

September 27, 2019 at 1:28 AM

Kurt, we miss you! come back! It has been three weeks! Thank you for writing this one. Maybe you are storing some new poems up? And you will serenade us with an avalanche of poems soon?

Connie Marcum Wong

September 24, 2019 at 6:14 PM

Where are you Kurt? I hope you are enjoying a vacation. I look forward to your next poem. Aloha, Connie : ) xxoo

Robert Lindley

September 13, 2019 at 1:40 PM

Your depths in verse awe me my friend. This has that in spades and its beauty is enhanced by its author's poetic genius... A fav...

Gershon Wolf

September 4, 2019 at 6:34 PM

Rather amazing! ... I'm going to go out on a long tree limb here and predict that you'll be the ONLY contest entrant whose song is by Edvard Grieg. Whatcha think? ~ gw

Gershon Wolf

September 16, 2019 at 9:45 PM

Hey, please see soup mail. Thanks!

Kurt Ravidas

September 5, 2019 at 8:39 AM

The song is fantasic but this is not a song contest. I think I'll lose: the poem is not pretty good)