Zilch

"Vi træffes der, min Ven!" Solvejgs sang* once after eons we'll meet there again my friend - time's zilch for lovers 9/3/2019 Maureen McGreavy’s Sing Me A Senryu Poetry Contest Favorite song: Solveig's Song by Edvard Grieg https://youtu.be/n3SyreMN7y8 * (nor.) "We'll meet there again, my friend!" Solveig's Song

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/7/2019 7:17:00 PM

Lovely job you did here. I see you got a win. congrats! I got "zilch" haha

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/7/2019 3:17:00 PM

So beautiful!!

James Inman

Date: 10/5/2019 9:45:00 AM

Not familiar with the song but your senryu says so much.

Constance La France

Date: 10/3/2019 5:12:00 PM

Kurt congratulations on your win in the contest!

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/3/2019 4:25:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Kurt.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/3/2019 2:23:00 PM

Indeed, time does not count for those who are in love, Kurt! I love the haunting song you chose. Congratulations on your win. Regards // paul

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/3/2019 2:16:00 PM

I love the sentiment in your words Kurt as you took me to eons from now. Congrats on your win.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/3/2019 9:31:00 AM

Really enjoy this one. Thank you Kurt. Congratulations on your win. xomo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/27/2019 1:28:00 AM

Kurt, we miss you! come back! It has been three weeks! Thank you for writing this one. Maybe you are storing some new poems up? And you will serenade us with an avalanche of poems soon?

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/24/2019 6:14:00 PM

Where are you Kurt? I hope you are enjoying a vacation. I look forward to your next poem. Aloha, Connie : ) xxoo

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/13/2019 1:40:00 PM

Your depths in verse awe me my friend. This has that in spades and its beauty is enhanced by its author's poetic genius... A fav...

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/4/2019 6:34:00 PM

Rather amazing! ... I'm going to go out on a long tree limb here and predict that you'll be the ONLY contest entrant whose song is by Edvard Grieg. Whatcha think? ~ gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/16/2019 9:45:00 PM

Hey, please see soup mail. Thanks!

Kurt Ravidas
Date: 9/5/2019 8:39:00 AM

The song is fantasic but this is not a song contest. I think I'll lose: the poem is not pretty good)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/4/2019 5:16:00 PM

Cool one! Uniqueness is you! Kim

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/3/2019 1:33:00 PM

This is beautiful Kurt! : ) xxoo