Zesty Birds

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Silver streaks of zingy songbirds and choral trills. Orioles in Scarlet - gorgeous carolers of dawn canzonet with a sapphire score. Rich viol spells of melodic melody they engulf my twisted skysill featuring lavender gold and honeyed agate spring odes silky lilac skylight accents.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/29/2023 7:16:00 AM

Very nicely done! The work of a skilled poet! Congratulations!

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/25/2023 10:28:00 AM

Very cinematic! Congratulations on your win with this gorgeous write!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2023 4:08:00 AM

Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara

Jay Narain

Date: 7/23/2023 12:52:00 PM

With unique words, you paint a beautiful picture. Great work.

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/22/2023 3:42:00 PM

Hi Lasaad, Your painted a lovely picture with words.The picture works so well with your poem. Well done. Have a nice day and weekend:-) Alexis

Paige Hind

Date: 7/22/2023 1:50:00 PM

Beautiful work, Sotto! I am enchanted!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/22/2023 12:27:00 PM

To paint a picture without brushes, to create an image without the use of colorful paints, to imprint regal birds upon a page with only words, is what you have done my dear friend, and you did it so splendidly. A Maestro of Poetry.