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zeroing in

just have to love fate things going wrong teaches so much life's repeat miss-takes stan sand

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Date: 6/20/2019 8:36:00 PM
Miss-steak after missed-take after miss-take. What can you do?! :) gw
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Date: 6/20/2019 10:06:00 PM
miss steak mistook mistakes...difficult to phrase
Date: 6/20/2019 12:23:00 PM
This is a clever write Sand - well penned. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/20/2019 1:42:00 PM
i've zeroed in all my life and...i've no idea how close i am to what : )
Date: 6/19/2019 10:13:00 PM
LOve your word play in this!
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Date: 6/19/2019 10:15:00 PM
thanks : ) spur of the moment spelling...cofcofhrrmph