Len Gasun Poet Rhyme

Zero

I will go on diet
I’ll purchase products with zilch fats and calories
at markets

Vegies only
Drink coke zero from groceries
Solely!

Less meal
No more pantries
Nil!

I will go on diet
Drink coke zero from groceries
Nil!



April 19,2022 12.24am




Let's Minichu on zero
Contest Judged:  5/8/2022 3:47:00 AM
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani 
Place 9 (10 w)

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Constance La France April 21, 2022 at 9:07 AM Len, such a fun poem, well done (PS: I sent you a soupmail) ~Constance Len Gasun April 21, 2022 at 9:17 AM Thank you my dear friend, Constance for your kind words/comment on my poem. I have already received your soup mail, Hope you got my reply. Thanks a lot dear. God bless you always. Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu April 19, 2022 at 11:38 AM Hello Len, Okay becareful what you eat. You can put less food on your plate. That helps to. Hugs my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu April 21, 2022 at 10:34 AM Hello Len, You are welcome my dear friend. God bless you Len my dear friend. Hugs. Len Gasun April 21, 2022 at 3:49 AM I will my dear friend, Darl. Thank you so much for your loving advice.God bless you dear. Hugs