Notes About The Poem

Author's Notes:  "Zephyr's Magic," is a Heroic Couplet I originally wrote for my new book on February 15, 2015.  It is set in Iambic Pentameter.  With this poem I explore the wonder and associated magic of the "Zephyr" or the warm "West Wind" as it relates the mythology of the "Greek God Zephyr of the West Wind."  Writing this poem, as the narrator, I take it upon myself verse-by-verse to speak of the gentleness, warmth, magic, and enchantment of Zephyr and his West Wind.  The thematic takeaways from this poem are: (1) Zephyr being a Greek God is, of course, a magical and majestic figure; (2) As the God of the West Wind, his wind is gentle, caressing, warm, and yet, compelling being a force from a God; (3) As I develop the metaphor of Zephyr, I touch on his relational skills in magic and enchantment as evidenced by my mention of a dream of "love past my reach" or a "lost love" in effect; and (4) I conclude this couplet on the note that I've felt the warmth of the West Wind and the equal effect of Zephyr's magic and enchantment throughout the whole episode as depicted.  There's lot of information here for consideration in this 14-verse Heroic Couplet.  (Gary Bateman - May 6, 2015) (Heroic Couplet in Iambic Pentameter)   

Categories:  allegory, dream, imagery, journey, magic, metaphor, and wisdom.

Technical Characteristics of this Heroic Couplet:

Meter: Iambic Pentameter

Syllables per Verse: 10

Total Syllable Count: 140

Structure: Seven Couplets / 14 Verses

Rhyme Pattern:  aa|bb|cc|dd|ee|ff|gg

Word Count: 111

("How Many Syllables Counter" was used for syllable confirmation for both automated

and manual syllable counts and cross-check.)

 

Zephyr's Magic

Zephyr’s Magic

I feel the delight of Zephyr’s Magic,
As I walk in nighttime mist majestic.  

This West wind caresses my very soul,
As I walk earful of a faint bell toll.

This West wind is so warm and compelling;
It envelopes me whole now—so telling.

Zephyr enchants my slumber on the beach,
Charming me to dream of love past my reach.

With Zephyr’s spell I dreamt so deep and well, 
Of that lost love missed—I shan’t ever tell!  

Zephyr’s wind touches and warms well my face,
As I sigh and look on in endless space.

Walking home Zephyr’s Magic I feel more,
Enchanting me ‘til I walked thru the door!

Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved
(May 6, 2015) (Heroic Couplet)

*Originally released in my new book on February 15, 2015.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 5/29/2015 2:25:00 PM
powerful piece of writing dear pal it just blew me away gary beautiful pen
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/30/2015 4:41:00 PM
Thanks Liam!! I like doing the couplets as you know. The Heroic Couplet is bit more challenging with the iambic pentameter metered requirement. Glad to see your wonderful comment. Best Always, Gary
Date: 5/7/2015 8:16:00 PM
WOW. The words roll off my tongue! Beautiful. A 7. Best to you, Gary. :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/8/2015 3:32:00 AM
Thank Kim!! I really appreciate your read here and your comments and the "7." All the best to you!! Spill Ink!! Cheers, Gary
Date: 5/7/2015 3:09:00 PM
Hi Gary! It is good to be back reading your poetry; been away for a while. Zephyr’s magic is very evident in these couplets; he inspires you while tugging at your senses. Congrats on your new book. All the best. // paul
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/7/2015 5:29:00 PM
Hello Paul!! Glad to be back. I'm slowly ramping up once again in Poetry Soup. And thanks for acknowledging my new book "Conversations with My Muse." (I have two classified ads on my book posted with PS in the Classified AD section.)The Zephyr Magic write is quite unique and I found the Heroic couplet to be a great vehicle for expressing this theme!! I will be by to check out your latest poems too. Best Wishes Always, Gary
Date: 5/7/2015 2:48:00 PM
- Gary, this is "my p.o.t.d." !!! - The form: Heroic Couplets are completely "king" - Thank you for your've explained it so well, even I understood it :) - A wonderful poem, by an "champion" !!!! (T.R.+ F.) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/7/2015 5:18:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, WOW -- I'm glad my Heroic Couplet here made it to the top of your category as "my p.o.t.d." With that, I'm sure I did something right with this particular write. The Heroic Couplet in 7 couplet stanzas = the length of doing a Shakespearean Sonnet in its 14-verse configuration. I am very pleased you liked this piece. I will be doing more of these in the future. Best Wishes . . . Gary!!
Date: 5/6/2015 6:29:00 AM
A flawless poem! So beautiful and brilliant! It is lovely how passionately and gently the Greek God inspires the narrator. Always, Laura
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Gary Bateman
Date: 5/6/2015 6:44:00 AM
Hello Laura, Thanks so much for your read and your very kind comments. This one took a while for me to construct back in February since I wasn't sure if I would use a regular rhymed couplet or the heroic couplet. But I got it to work in iambic pentameter, and really liked the end result. (I did some research on "Zephyr" himself; quite interesting.) Best Always, Gary
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