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zephyr

a gentle zephyr
soaked oak trees rain down....
yesterday's thunderstorm fear

rainstormhaiku

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sara Etgen-Baker

May 25, 2026 at 5:17 PM

love how you used the word 'zephyr'....Faving. hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick

May 26, 2026 at 4:22 AM

I am honored that you faved it, Sara B. Thank you for the visit and nice review. Sara K.

Andrea Dietrich

May 25, 2026 at 4:49 PM

Nice one. Zephyr indeed is western wind

Sara Kendrick

May 26, 2026 at 4:22 AM

Thank you, Andrea. We have been having weather systems from the west which we get a lot of the systems from the southwest, northwest, west and occasionally some from the east. We have gotten some good rain for which I am thankful. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K.

Howard Kerr

May 23, 2026 at 10:11 PM

Impressive imagery, apt words, and poetic flow. Thanks for posting this Sara. Howard

Sara Kendrick

May 24, 2026 at 4:56 AM

Glad you liked it, Howard. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K.

Ken Martin

May 23, 2026 at 8:21 AM

On cloud nine cool beans.

Sara Kendrick

May 23, 2026 at 12:15 PM

Thank you, Ken. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K.

Nette Onclaud

May 23, 2026 at 7:16 AM

very descriptive ku, sara...unique as well with a 5/ 5/ 7 syl pattern!

Sara Kendrick

May 23, 2026 at 12:14 PM

It has a 3-5-3 word count it is called a Lune. There are two kinds of lunes and one has 3-5-3 syllables and the other has word count. Thank you for stopping by, Nette. I appreciate your visit. Sara K.

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