Joseph May Poet Nonet

Zephyr

"Soft is the strain when zephyr gently blows"- Alexander Pope

 A summer breeze in the garden plays
 As lilies sway to its caress
 Daisies move in rhythmic ways
 Lilacs move to and fro
 It's choreographed 
 on a summer
 day, by a
 gentle
 breeze

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David Crandall May 6, 2024 at 8:16 PM A nice, pretty picture. I can feel the breeze and see the flowers.

Janice Canerdy May 1, 2024 at 10:04 PM Congrats on your win. Lovely use of personification! Janice

Paula Goldsmith April 28, 2024 at 9:16 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Zephyr" write/story. I can see the flowers/feel the breeze... Have a blessed weekend..................

Anne-Lise Andresen April 27, 2024 at 11:01 AM - Back with a congratulations, Joseph ... well deserved :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs

Constance La France April 26, 2024 at 7:33 PM Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, Constance Joseph May April 27, 2024 at 6:27 PM Thank you for .y placement Constance

Victor Buhagiar April 26, 2024 at 2:33 AM I haven't seen the results yet as I have not entered any poems lately, but I hope you got a high placement.

Christina Bowring April 25, 2024 at 12:02 PM A beautiful Nonet dear Joseph with wonderful descriptions. Such a tranquil read as you visualise the breeze playing gently with nature. Really lovely and delightful. Thank you for sharing :):)

Brandy Nicole April 24, 2024 at 5:52 PM ' choreographed by a gentle breeze. ' Such a beautiful image to behold. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2024 at 1:56 AM - Beautiful poem, Joseph :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Jan Allison April 23, 2024 at 1:45 PM an absolutely delightful nonet Joseph, hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet April 23, 2024 at 12:49 PM A lovely poem that portrays the Zephyr so well and so wonderfully that it makes the reader feel the thrill of being outside. Enjoyed to the fullest.

Silent One April 23, 2024 at 12:06 PM This is lovely and nice idea to use this form. Best of luck in the contest..

Vijay Pandit April 23, 2024 at 4:59 AM Delightful poem surfing on joy of nature. Much enjoyed.

Victor Buhagiar April 23, 2024 at 3:13 AM Oh I loved this nonet. Describes the Zephyr so well. Best for a win.

Ink Empress April 23, 2024 at 2:05 AM How beautiful and soul warming is this nonet. I love your interpretation of the word and how youv delivered it. As always! Brilliant, best wishes