Zephyr

"Soft is the strain when zephyr gently blows"- Alexander Pope A summer breeze in the garden plays As lilies sway to its caress Daisies move in rhythmic ways Lilacs move to and fro It's choreographed on a summer day, by a gentle breeze

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David Crandall

Date: 5/6/2024 8:16:00 PM

A nice, pretty picture. I can feel the breeze and see the flowers.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/1/2024 10:04:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Lovely use of personification! Janice

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/28/2024 9:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Zephyr" write/story. I can see the flowers/feel the breeze... Have a blessed weekend..................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2024 11:01:00 AM

- Back with a congratulations, Joseph ... well deserved :) - Have a great weekend :) - hugs

Constance La France

Date: 4/26/2024 7:33:00 PM

Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, Constance

Joseph May
Date: 4/27/2024 6:27:00 PM

Thank you for .y placement Constance

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/26/2024 2:33:00 AM

I haven't seen the results yet as I have not entered any poems lately, but I hope you got a high placement.

Christina Bowring

Date: 4/25/2024 12:02:00 PM

A beautiful Nonet dear Joseph with wonderful descriptions. Such a tranquil read as you visualise the breeze playing gently with nature. Really lovely and delightful. Thank you for sharing :):)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/24/2024 5:52:00 PM

' choreographed by a gentle breeze. ' Such a beautiful image to behold. Your thoughts bring a smile, Joseph. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/24/2024 1:56:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, Joseph :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 4/23/2024 1:45:00 PM

an absolutely delightful nonet Joseph, hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/23/2024 12:49:00 PM

A lovely poem that portrays the Zephyr so well and so wonderfully that it makes the reader feel the thrill of being outside. Enjoyed to the fullest.