Zen mode

when awareness drops we react
recognising this as a fact
we choose consciousness correction
by forging with stillness a pact
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August 29, 2026 at 11:56 PM
I love how perfectly the rubaiyat form complements the meditative theme of this piece. The AABA rhyme scheme provides a wonderfully steady, grounding rhythm that reinforces the idea of "consciousness correction." The concept of forging a pact with stillness instead of reacting is such a powerful and centering takeaway. A beautifully mindful and well-crafted stanza!
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August 30, 2026 at 3:07 AM
Thank you, Alison. A standard Buddhist mindfulness practice.
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