Zen mode

the soles of our feet make contact with earth
whilst purified palms radiate bliss heat
each breath intake represents our rebirth
resplendent with vibrance feeling upbeat
throb of blissfulness that does not deplete
with all nodes entwined acting as a whole
we transform as light all scriptures extol
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Smith nee Howarth Avatar
August 22, 2026 at 9:50 PM
This is a wonderfully grounding and uplifting rhyme royal. The physical imagery of feet connecting with the earth paired with the spiritual warmth of radiating "bliss heat" perfectly captures the essence of deep meditation. Your seamless rhymes and steady meter beautifully mirror the calming, continuous cycle of breath, leading the reader to such a radiant final image of transforming into light. Thank you for sharing this centering piece!
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