Zen mode

although boundaryless 
within form we may size
the Self as a ball of light
centred in our upper chest
around which nodes revolve 
like planets orbiting the sun
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March 18, 2025 at 1:24 AM
nice write....and, zen mode.....like a 5th dimensional perspective.....len
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March 18, 2025 at 7:42 AM
3rd, 4th, 5th dimension … what are they but concepts? The vedas speak of 64 dimensions. On an as is where is basis, we cannot even silence thoughts! Happy you enjoyed the poem, sand.
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