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Zen mode

translucent light in the void neither dark nor bright a surreal calm no space no time our presence feels quite at home we remain thus suspended astonished later at the immersion

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Date: 2/12/2024 5:30:00 AM
you've captured the essence of 'being' when one's suspended...I've been there during yoga and meditation...when I 'return' I'm astonished, like you said
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Date: 2/11/2024 6:34:00 PM
Ah, if it only lasted forever... One day, it will...
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Date: 2/11/2024 7:01:00 PM
The trick as I see it, is to somehow develop the ability to bilocate between the material and ethereal breath by breath. As you say, one day it will be so.

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