Zen mode

translucent light in the void
neither dark nor bright
a surreal calm
no space 
no time
our presence
feels quite at home
we remain thus suspended 
astonished later at the immersion
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Wolf Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 6:34 PM
Ah, if it only lasted forever... One day, it will...
Seeker Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 7:01 PM
The trick as I see it, is to somehow develop the ability to bilocate between the material and ethereal breath by breath. As you say, one day it will be so.
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