Zen Mode

one with breath
flowing into form
feeling bliss beats

one with breath
moving into space
where peace pervades

at breath flow pause 
shimmering living light
recognised by inner sight 

15-December-2022
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 7:30 PM
This stanza alone makes a perfect poem "one with breath moving into space where peace pervades"
Seeker Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 7:36 PM
Immediate and intimate but we are hypnotised by objects
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