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Zen Enlightenment

what's enlightenment? just seeing the same old things in a brand new way

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2014 5:31:00 PM

that is it in a nutshell! Congrats for your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2014 12:56:00 PM

- John, well said .... in three lines - Well done - Congrats with your 15th place in the contest :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless

Date: 9/2/2014 8:31:00 AM

Perhaps the title should be "ZENLIGHTENMENT". "to see the universe in a grain of sand" (not sure who said it but it always kept me right sized) Congrats on your placement in the contest.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/2/2014 7:17:00 AM

This is so true John! Loved ur haiku, congrats on huge win!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/2/2014 5:06:00 AM

Congrats on the win, john

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/15/2014 7:05:00 AM

Awesome write on enlightenment, John

Jan Allison

Date: 8/14/2014 12:22:00 PM

Very clever haiku - good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx