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“All that is, is a splash in the ocean ~ Why for then needless thought flow commotion” ~ quote by poet Seeking God's love and light, heart's yen for zen, cajoles us to listen to soul's whispers before we pen, words that glisten. Dropping narrow thought, we’re in prayer mode, as ego fades away and love beats in our heart's abode, throb every day. In an aspect of embrace and release, intuitive recall empowers mind that flows with ease, in a bliss squall. 20-Dec-2022 __________ Constance La France Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing form Rhyme pattern: abab, cdcd, efef syllable pattern: 10, 6, 8, 4 in each stanza Indentation: 0, 10, 6, 20 spaces Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 1/24/2023 11:32:00 AM
Seeker, indeed writing is a prayer of the soul delving deeply into the adventure of life with our Creator often with "words that glisten" in a "blissful squall!" Congratulations on your win! You have captured the essence of writing in beautiful poetic lines. Blessings of blissful writing to you nestled in the palm of God.
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Date: 1/24/2023 9:33:00 PM
Thank you dear Sam ~ :)
Date: 1/24/2023 7:42:00 AM
Seeker, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing, I love your poem, the pic and quote, well done, Constance
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Date: 1/24/2023 9:31:00 PM
Thanks for teaching us a new poetry form, Constance!
Date: 1/19/2023 10:41:00 AM
Excellent verse . Congratulations on your 1st place win in Constance’s contest. Hugs blessings, Eve
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Date: 1/19/2023 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, Eve
Date: 1/18/2023 7:09:00 AM
Many congratulations on your contest win Seeker, it's well deserved with this stunning poetry.
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Date: 1/18/2023 5:34:00 PM
Credit to Constance for inventing this exquisite form
Date: 1/18/2023 3:43:00 AM
Creative way to go with this challenge. Congratulations on your winner. Sara.
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Date: 1/18/2023 5:34:00 PM
Thank you dear Sara ~ I guess we are each drawn toward where our innate affinity is
Date: 1/17/2023 11:41:00 PM
Great writing on one of the best spiritual exercises in the world. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/18/2023 12:49:00 AM
Thank you dear Chris
Date: 1/17/2023 7:23:00 PM
Consoling words released yond a single breath, US. An illuminating penned extraordinaire my friend. My compliments on your 1st Place accomplishment, Aloha William
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Date: 1/17/2023 7:44:00 PM
Thank you dear William
Date: 1/17/2023 5:47:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 1/17/2023 7:18:00 PM
Thanks Kim! The contest is judged? Let me have a look at the entries then :)
Date: 12/20/2022 1:24:00 AM
Really beautiful U.S…..Debx
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Date: 12/20/2022 3:16:00 AM
Thank you Deb

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