Zeal of November

My evening sky glints motifs gold
In orange vibes turned ruby bold
Glowing remnants of shining snow
Where pewter winds merrily blow
Swirling imprints of amber glaze
Bending hues of setting sun rays

Prairies sway season’s dreaded hold
Wailing in grief, as blossoms fold,
For fallen leaves and wintry woe
That shudders trees in frosted throe
While browning pastures cattle graze
Where foothills gleam in twilight haze

When fervor yawns in dreary mold
And garden sighs of parching cold
Pine trees, ebullient, dance in row
Enchanting hearts in nature’s show
While ogling the stars passions blaze
As romance blooms in moonlit gaze

On horizon mauve dreams unfold
Where blush of morn lovers behold
Greeting November's scarlet glow
That tawny dawn's sunbeams bestow
Glistening face of shortened days
Wooing warmth in autumn's malaise

Written: November 26, 2020
Submitted on October 26, 2022 to:
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 18 Poetry Contest

Placed 1st: Lay November Poetry Contest
Sponsor: William Kekaula
Eight syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)
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Michael Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 9:11 AM
A write full of flair and style....you dance through it majestically.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 6:56 AM
With an immense pleasure and great delight I congratulate you, dear Vijay on your outstanding placement in the list of poetry of great beauty! So blessed and grateful to share such an honour with great souls of depth and wealth.. My deepest regards and blessings.
Pandit Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 10:08 AM
Thank you Besma for your return visit--much appreciate, as always.
Watt Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 11:22 PM
A cornucopia of rich autumn images in this, Vijay. Congratulations on reaching the top of the Best New Poem list ~ John
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 4:53 AM
Much appreciate John--many thanks. I am happy to cede to your wonderful poem (now #1).
Theraven Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 8:59 PM
Vijay, "On horizon mauve dreams unfold Where blush of morn lovers behold" What a lovely portrait detailed from your fine brush wielded so close to a true heart. -Richard
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Thank you Richard--much appreciate.
Callus Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 12:55 PM
A most delightful poem, Vijay; vivid imagery and rhyme stand out. ~ Best regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 5:27 AM
Much appreciate Paul--many thanks.
Kaufman Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 9:27 AM
congratulations on your win. this is a lovely write
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 11:36 AM
Much appreciate Nancy--many thanks.
Devonshire Avatar
December 9, 2020 at 2:22 PM
A stunningly beautiful piece, Vijay. Winter is a more pleasant season here in the South, but there is always the promise of spring returning to lift our spirits when it seems cold and bleak outside. You are truly amazing! Love, Carolyn
Pandit Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 4:46 AM
Much appreciate my friend your kind remarks. Many thanks, Carolyn.
Kulkarni Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 12:28 PM
Beautifully penned Vijay as usual! Loved reading it!! -Smita
Pandit Avatar
December 8, 2020 at 3:17 PM
Thank you Smita--much appreciate.
Andresen Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 5:08 AM
- A wonderful November poem, a pleasure to read Vijay - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.
Daniel Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 9:32 PM
Absolutely enchanting and beautiful, your vocabulary is amazing, Vijay, congratulations on your win:)
Pandit Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Thank you Jo--much appreciate.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 5:05 AM
Swirling, bending, wailing, moonlit gaze, scarlet glow all part of this beautiful imagery! Hope your day is merry! Congratulations!
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 7:56 AM
Much appreciate Kim--many thanks. Happy festive season to you my friend.
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 9:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 7:55 AM
Thank you Eve--much appreciate.
May Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 11:25 AM
Well penned Vijay, Congrats on your top win..
Pandit Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 3:12 PM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Sands Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 5:27 PM
Absolutely beautiful Vijay. So many nice lines. Congratulations :)
Pandit Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 5:09 AM
Much appreciate your and comments, as always, Heidi. Many many thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 1:42 PM
So glad this got a win, Vijay. Congratulations.
Pandit Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 5:08 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Kendrick Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 6:29 AM
Congrats on your winner. Sara
Pandit Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 9:29 AM
Thank you Sara--much appreciate.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 5:57 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Vijay, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Pandit Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 9:29 AM
Thank you William--much appreciate.
Delaney Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 2:18 AM
A wonderful flowing November poem, Vijay: you really captured the moods of late Fall in all its splendor. Best, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 7:22 AM
Much appreciate, SuZ--many thanks.
Downing  Avatar
December 1, 2020 at 8:37 PM
Spectacular job, Vijay! You’re one amazing poet...
Pandit Avatar
December 2, 2020 at 7:21 AM
Thank you Akkina--much appreciate.
Y. Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 7:42 AM
WoW! Vijay, What a beautiful write to view this fine morning. Your content, rhymes, and imagery are outstanding. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
Pandit Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 7:50 AM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate. A happy day to you as well, Alexis.
Smith Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 7:38 AM
Wonderful entry Vijay, all the best my friend...
Pandit Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 7:48 AM
Thank you Charlie--much appreciate my friend. Hope you are doing well.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 5:57 AM
An apotheosis of November! A Fave my friend, Vijay! Blessings
Pandit Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 6:08 AM
So nice to hear my friend--especially from the one with divine wisdom. Honored by your visit and comments, Demetrios. Much appreciate--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE. Stay safe and blessed!
Horsman Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 1:00 AM
You make November so breath taking and beautiful. Love this.
Pandit Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 6:01 AM
Thank you Harry--much appreciate, as always.
Nicole Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 12:38 PM
This time of year is breathtaking. The colorful array as leaves caress the day. All the seasonal decorations- Thanksgiving and celebrations. A time of togetherness. Your thoughts wrap softly around me and my heart. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 6:01 AM
Much appreciate, Brandy--always a joy to read your comments. many thanks.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 1:11 AM
A cold November "nature's show" presented in a freezing season, rendered warm and made eager to see and feel when weaved by a great poet who imparts his heart and mind in his work of art! A great poetry worthy of being highly rated and honoured! A fave and a win! Dear Vijay, a great pleasure to read your wonderful poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings.
Pandit Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 5:18 AM
Always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate your supportive feedback, Besma. Many thanks, as always. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
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