Zeal of November

My evening sky glints motifs gold
In orange vibes turned ruby bold
Glowing remnants of shining snow
Where pewter winds merrily blow
Swirling imprints of amber glaze
Bending hues of setting sun rays

Prairies sway season’s dreaded hold
Wailing in grief, as blossoms fold,
For fallen leaves and wintry woe
That shudders trees in frosted throe
While browning pastures cattle graze
Where foothills gleam in twilight haze

When fervor yawns in dreary mold
And garden sighs of parching cold
Pine trees, ebullient, dance in row
Enchanting hearts in nature’s show
While ogling the stars passions blaze
As romance blooms in moonlit gaze

On horizon mauve dreams unfold
Where blush of morn lovers behold
Greeting November's scarlet glow
That tawny dawn's sunbeams bestow
Glistening face of shortened days
Wooing warmth in autumn's malaise

Written: November 26, 2020
Submitted on October 26, 2022 to:
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 18 Poetry Contest

Placed 1st: Lay November Poetry Contest
Sponsor: William Kekaula
Eight syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 1/11/2021 9:11:00 AM
A write full of flair and style....you dance through it majestically.
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Date: 12/16/2020 6:56:00 AM
With an immense pleasure and great delight I congratulate you, dear Vijay on your outstanding placement in the list of poetry of great beauty! So blessed and grateful to share such an honour with great souls of depth and wealth.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 12/16/2020 10:08:00 AM
Thank you Besma for your return visit--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 12/14/2020 11:22:00 PM
A cornucopia of rich autumn images in this, Vijay. Congratulations on reaching the top of the Best New Poem list ~ John
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Date: 12/15/2020 4:53:00 AM
Much appreciate John--many thanks. I am happy to cede to your wonderful poem (now #1).
Date: 12/14/2020 8:59:00 PM
Vijay, "On horizon mauve dreams unfold Where blush of morn lovers behold" What a lovely portrait detailed from your fine brush wielded so close to a true heart. -Richard
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Date: 12/15/2020 4:52:00 AM
Thank you Richard--much appreciate.
Date: 12/13/2020 12:55:00 PM
A most delightful poem, Vijay; vivid imagery and rhyme stand out. ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 12/14/2020 5:27:00 AM
Much appreciate Paul--many thanks.
Date: 12/13/2020 9:27:00 AM
congratulations on your win. this is a lovely write
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Date: 12/13/2020 11:36:00 AM
Much appreciate Nancy--many thanks.
Date: 12/9/2020 2:22:00 PM
A stunningly beautiful piece, Vijay. Winter is a more pleasant season here in the South, but there is always the promise of spring returning to lift our spirits when it seems cold and bleak outside. You are truly amazing! Love, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/10/2020 4:46:00 AM
Much appreciate my friend your kind remarks. Many thanks, Carolyn.
Date: 12/8/2020 12:28:00 PM
Beautifully penned Vijay as usual! Loved reading it!! -Smita
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Date: 12/8/2020 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Smita--much appreciate.
Date: 12/7/2020 5:08:00 AM
- A wonderful November poem, a pleasure to read Vijay - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/7/2020 8:30:00 AM
Much appreciate Anne-Lise--many thanks.
Date: 12/6/2020 9:32:00 PM
Absolutely enchanting and beautiful, your vocabulary is amazing, Vijay, congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 12/7/2020 8:30:00 AM
Thank you Jo--much appreciate.
Date: 12/5/2020 5:05:00 AM
Swirling, bending, wailing, moonlit gaze, scarlet glow all part of this beautiful imagery! Hope your day is merry! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/5/2020 7:56:00 AM
Much appreciate Kim--many thanks. Happy festive season to you my friend.
Date: 12/4/2020 9:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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Date: 12/5/2020 7:55:00 AM
Thank you Eve--much appreciate.
Date: 12/4/2020 11:25:00 AM
Well penned Vijay, Congrats on your top win..
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Date: 12/4/2020 3:12:00 PM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Date: 12/3/2020 5:27:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Vijay. So many nice lines. Congratulations :)
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Date: 12/4/2020 5:09:00 AM
Much appreciate your and comments, as always, Heidi. Many many thanks.
Date: 12/3/2020 1:42:00 PM
So glad this got a win, Vijay. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/4/2020 5:08:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 12/3/2020 6:29:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 12/3/2020 9:29:00 AM
Thank you Sara--much appreciate.
Date: 12/2/2020 5:57:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Vijay, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Date: 12/3/2020 9:29:00 AM
Thank you William--much appreciate.
Date: 12/2/2020 2:18:00 AM
A wonderful flowing November poem, Vijay: you really captured the moods of late Fall in all its splendor. Best, SuZ
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Date: 12/2/2020 7:22:00 AM
Much appreciate, SuZ--many thanks.
Date: 12/1/2020 8:37:00 PM
Spectacular job, Vijay! You’re one amazing poet...
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Date: 12/2/2020 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Akkina--much appreciate.
Date: 11/30/2020 7:42:00 AM
WoW! Vijay, What a beautiful write to view this fine morning. Your content, rhymes, and imagery are outstanding. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/30/2020 7:50:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate. A happy day to you as well, Alexis.
Date: 11/30/2020 7:38:00 AM
Wonderful entry Vijay, all the best my friend...
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Date: 11/30/2020 7:48:00 AM
Thank you Charlie--much appreciate my friend. Hope you are doing well.
Date: 11/30/2020 5:57:00 AM
An apotheosis of November! A Fave my friend, Vijay! Blessings
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Date: 11/30/2020 6:08:00 AM
So nice to hear my friend--especially from the one with divine wisdom. Honored by your visit and comments, Demetrios. Much appreciate--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE. Stay safe and blessed!
Date: 11/29/2020 1:00:00 AM
You make November so breath taking and beautiful. Love this.
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Date: 11/29/2020 6:01:00 AM
Thank you Harry--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 11/28/2020 12:38:00 PM
This time of year is breathtaking. The colorful array as leaves caress the day. All the seasonal decorations- Thanksgiving and celebrations. A time of togetherness. Your thoughts wrap softly around me and my heart. :) Brandy
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Date: 11/29/2020 6:01:00 AM
Much appreciate, Brandy--always a joy to read your comments. many thanks.
Date: 11/28/2020 1:11:00 AM
A cold November "nature's show" presented in a freezing season, rendered warm and made eager to see and feel when weaved by a great poet who imparts his heart and mind in his work of art! A great poetry worthy of being highly rated and honoured! A fave and a win! Dear Vijay, a great pleasure to read your wonderful poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 11/28/2020 5:18:00 AM
Always a joy to read your comments. Much appreciate your supportive feedback, Besma. Many thanks, as always. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
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