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Ze Hiena

Hienas don't taik cair of higeen;
we’r fond of karrion; we drink warm jin
wizaut tonik and we neva uze
ze mornin afta peels. 
                                  “Beest's on ze looz!” -
you shaut in panik, raizin flags of truce
over your comfy gravez but we refewz
to uphold dead men rites. Oh, wat a feest
of flesh! Ze dead will neva rest in peast.


14.07.2019
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Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/15/2019 5:46:00 PM You’ve given voice to ze hiena...a grave one! Nicely done! Login to Reply Kurt Ravidas Date: 7/15/2019 5:48:00 PM Zanks, Kim. Rais of luv)

Wendy Watson Date: 7/15/2019 1:23:00 PM Oh dear, I've just read your explanatory message below and have to admit that I thoroughly enjoyed reading it aloud in a German accent! It was very amusing! Login to Reply Wendy Watson Date: 7/16/2019 10:49:00 AM Ach so! Dann sollte ich lieber eine Dalek-Stimme annehmen! Kurt Ravidas Date: 7/15/2019 4:39:00 PM Dies ist ein abstraktes alien)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/15/2019 8:12:00 AM This is a fun one to get the tongue around. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Kurt Ravidas Date: 7/15/2019 10:00:00 AM Actually, I strongly doubted whether I should do it in a here. For someone for whom English is not a native language, it was a pretty risky experiment) Anyway, I wanted my hyena to look like an alien. I have no idea whether I succeeded or not.

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 7/15/2019 4:09:00 AM I like hyenas. They display the best of human nature ... Login to Reply Kurt Ravidas Date: 7/15/2019 10:08:00 AM Thanks, Kai. P.S.: To my point of vew, a man is a crossroad of worlds. Minerals, plants, animals, man himself, gods... Depending on personal level of development, people show certain qualities. I agree, some of them don't differ from hyenas. At the same time, I saw people who looked like gods. A man is a complex creature)

Quoth Theraven Date: 7/14/2019 11:15:00 PM Kurt, Ze pom is am imageenativ delite. Good luck in the contest. -Richard Login to Reply Kurt Ravidas Date: 7/15/2019 10:09:00 AM Thank you, Quoz ZeRaven)

Gershon Wolf Date: 7/14/2019 9:55:00 PM Don't quite know what's more amazing -- that you wrote this or that I could actually read it. Thanks for the laughs, my friend! Login to Reply Kurt Ravidas Date: 7/15/2019 10:11:00 AM You're welcome, Wolf. I love you comments)