Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Limerick

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Yummy Treats For Christmas

losing two front teeth made Ashwin sad
                        eating Christmas cookies hard - feels mad!
                                  no chocolate, no game cards
                              two teeth back - that's all he wants,
                       more treats on his plate - big brother glad!
                    





                   December 14, 2021 (Edited on January 5, 2021) 
                I Need A Good Laugh: Xmas Limerick Poetry Contest
                                  Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
              Syllables (9-9-7-7-9) checked by howmanysyllables.com

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Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2021 at 2:36 PM Back with Congratulations on your win. This was a yummy write and cute picture. Have a Blessed Day......................

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2021 at 4:53 PM I know Anitha has a son whose name is Ashwin??Is it a common boy's name for you? Maybe I have remembered wrong the name of Anitha's son! Malabika Ray Choudhury December 24, 2021 at 5:03 PM Dear Andrea, it's not a common name for boys. It's the name of a star in constellation, according to Hindu mythology. You are right, Anitha's son's name is Ashwin too.

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2021 at 4:52 PM Mala, I really appreciate you trying a limerick and I wanted to show the cute idea you came up with. if it had rhymed, it would easily have gotten a numbered placement. Thanks for entering! Malabika Ray Choudhury December 24, 2021 at 5:04 PM No worries, Andrea. This is the first time I tried a Limerick - and didn't try hard on the rhyming. Thanks for HM.

Paula Goldsmith December 22, 2021 at 11:17 AM Your "Yummy Treats For Christmas" was a yummy write. So cute.  Have a Blessed Christmas.............................

Darlene De Beaulieu December 14, 2021 at 12:11 PM Hello Mala,I hope he gets his two front teeth for Christmas. Lov, & Friendship Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu December 14, 2021 at 3:34 PM HelloMal, he will be happy to get his two front teeth. Lov, & Friendship Darlene Malabika Ray Choudhury December 14, 2021 at 12:32 PM Hi Darlene, I hope so too. Merry Christmas! Love and blessings ~ Mala

Victor Buhagiar December 14, 2021 at 9:12 AM Oh, I loved this. He looks funny without those teeth. Glad tidings. Malabika Ray Choudhury December 14, 2021 at 9:18 AM Thanks, Victor. fun to write limericks!