Yummy Treats For Christmas

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losing two front teeth made Ashwin sad eating Christmas cookies hard - feels mad! no chocolate, no game cards two teeth back - that's all he wants, more treats on his plate - big brother glad! December 14, 2021 (Edited on January 5, 2021) I Need A Good Laugh: Xmas Limerick Poetry Contest Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Syllables (9-9-7-7-9) checked by howmanysyllables.com

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/26/2021 2:36:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. This was a yummy write and cute picture. Have a Blessed Day......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2021 4:53:00 PM

I know Anitha has a son whose name is Ashwin??Is it a common boy's name for you? Maybe I have remembered wrong the name of Anitha's son!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/24/2021 5:03:00 PM

Dear Andrea, it's not a common name for boys. It's the name of a star in constellation, according to Hindu mythology. You are right, Anitha's son's name is Ashwin too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2021 4:52:00 PM

Mala, I really appreciate you trying a limerick and I wanted to show the cute idea you came up with. if it had rhymed, it would easily have gotten a numbered placement. Thanks for entering!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/24/2021 5:04:00 PM

No worries, Andrea. This is the first time I tried a Limerick - and didn't try hard on the rhyming. Thanks for HM.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/22/2021 11:17:00 AM

Your "Yummy Treats For Christmas" was a yummy write. So cute. Have a Blessed Christmas.............................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/14/2021 12:11:00 PM

Hello Mala,I hope he gets his two front teeth for Christmas. Lov, & Friendship Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/14/2021 3:34:00 PM

HelloMal, he will be happy to get his two front teeth. Lov, & Friendship Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/14/2021 12:32:00 PM

Hi Darlene, I hope so too. Merry Christmas! Love and blessings ~ Mala

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/14/2021 9:12:00 AM

Oh, I loved this. He looks funny without those teeth. Glad tidings.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/14/2021 9:18:00 AM

Thanks, Victor. fun to write limericks!