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Saying I love you Has a more delicious sound Between kissing lips.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2013 11:53:00 AM

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Rollo West
Date: 1/3/2013 11:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for stopping by my friend. Rollo

Seren Roberts

Date: 1/3/2013 12:20:00 AM

Oh my Rollo another scorcher .....Seren

Rollo West
Date: 1/3/2013 11:27:00 AM

Hi Seren, thank you so much for sropping by. Rollo

Honestly J.T.

Date: 1/2/2013 9:18:00 PM

nice write. I like it - JH

Rollo West
Date: 1/2/2013 9:19:00 PM

Hello my friend and thank you for your great comments. Rollo

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/2/2013 9:11:00 PM

I can't think of a better way to pronounce "I love you" than within pursed lips! This is another one of your fantastic writes my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredible and outstanding poem this evening! What a delightful and enlightening piece you have presented here Rollo, Great Work!!

Rollo West
Date: 1/2/2013 9:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Russell, I so appreciate your comments. Rollo