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Published: 17th December 2021

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This Poem was placed 1st in the "A Christmas Gift Memory"  Poetry Contest sponsored by Bj Legros Kelley (Judged 29th December 2021)


Yuletide Fire

behind the logs on this crackling fire
the dulcet sound of a distant choir

wakes up the child and times in me 
like lights around a Christmas tree

and takes me back when sixties' chills
left ice inside our window sills

when Jesus lay behind the door 
of advent's number twenty four

when the greatest present that we had
was the presence of both mum and dad

when love and laughter fun and games
lit up the room just like these flames

that dance each year to times gone by
before they flicker, fade and die.
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Rodrigues Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 9:08 PM
Lovely sentiments, Gary! The presence of mom and dad special. God bless!
Radice Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 10:52 PM
Thank you Kim. Have a great day. Cheers - Gary
Hargreaves Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 1:49 AM
What lovely images; they bring back many fond memories. Thanks for this. Tony
Radice Avatar
January 9, 2022 at 3:37 AM
My pleasure Tony. Thanks so much for your visit and comments. Cheers - Gary
Mcintosh Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 1:42 PM
Wonderful write. I just love it :) God bless you and Happy New Year. Love, Gina
Radice Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 1:47 PM
Thank you Gina@ All the best for The New Year. Cheers - Gary
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 12:07 PM
i think this is my favorite of the day, or at least one of them. FAVE
Radice Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 12:30 PM
Thank you Andrea. I really appreciate that. All the best for The New Year. Cheers - Gary
Flood Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 2:33 AM
Oops, missed this one Gary. What a smashing Yuletide write. Reminded me of my own early christmases, icy windows, blazing fire and all. Congrats on your very worthy win. Have a great new year. Terry
Radice Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 3:02 AM
Will do - or at least I hope I will - Same to you Terry! All the best. Cheers - Gary
M  Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 7:25 AM
How very beautiful and captivating your poem is Gary! So enjoyed this one. Debx
Radice Avatar
December 30, 2021 at 10:35 AM
Thanks Deb :)
Daniel Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 4:05 AM
This is absolutely beautiful, Gary, congratulations on a fine win:) love the flow in this rhyme:)
Radice Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 5:45 AM
Thank you Jo! All the best for The New Year. Cheers - Gary
Calasibetta Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem. I was so delighted by the rhythm of your memories so well penned. Thank you for sharing your very warm and genuine expression of your Christmas Memories. Blessings, Paulette
Radice Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Thanks Paulette for your lovely comments. I can't think of any other poem I've penned where I have changed the last couplet as many times as I have this one. :) It may have even changed since your comments.. apologies if so. :) All the best for The New Year. Cheers - Gary
Roper Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 9:26 PM
Congratulations on your win , Gary, great verse.
Radice Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 2:10 AM
Thanks so much Eve - I've set aside time today to read all the winning entries in B J's contest so looking forward to it. All the best for the New Year. Cheers - Gary
Gaul Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 4:57 PM
Such a warm and cozy remembering all that's important. Nicely penned.
Radice Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 2:06 AM
Thanks Greg and all the best for the New Year. I've made some slight alterations to the poem since your comments and trust it still feels warm and cosy.. I was never happy with how it ended or the reference to the Wizard of Oz..I thought it sounded a bit clumsy..anyway.. I'm happier now..I think..:) Cheers - Gary
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 2:02 PM
I am so happy to see this wonderful fave of mine win First place in this contest. Congratulations! Blessings xxoo
Radice Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 2:36 PM
Connie, thank you again for your support and encouragement and have a great New Year! Cheers - Gary xx
Alex Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 3:07 AM
A beautiful couplet rhyme. Congratulations!
Radice Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 3:18 AM
Thank you Christuraj. All the best for The New Year! Cheers - Gary
Koplin Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 9:15 PM
Congratulations on your win Gary!
Radice Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 2:45 AM
Thank you Mark and all the best for the New Year. Cheers - Gary
Legros Kelley Avatar
December 24, 2021 at 6:20 PM
Congratulations on your first place win Gary! Another amazing write. Thank you for entering your poem in the contest. Merry Christmas!! May you and yours be blessed with a healthy and wonderful new year!
Radice Avatar
December 26, 2021 at 2:46 AM
Thank you BJ for another great competition and for your lovely comments. All the best for the new year. Cheers - Gary
Ashley Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Ah, Gary, your golden pen is afire in this bittersweet beauty. Your poem is so poignant and so soulfully expressed in brilliant metaphors, rhythm and rhymes. Your exquisite imagery brings me to the center of this lovely yet wistful scene. Best wishes for a win, my friend, and warmest wishes for a happy holiday season for you and yours.. ~Susan
Radice Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Thanks so much Susan. Your wonderful words read like a poem in themselves. :) Cheers - Gary
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 10:35 PM
Oh I think she will just love your entry. I was moved by your scenic old time Christmas. Your rhyme is always sublime Gary. I am Faving this Christmas gem. Blessings and Mele Kalikimaka. xxoo
Radice Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 3:45 AM
Thanks so much for your lovely comments and the fave Connie. Hau'oli kalikimaka a hau'oli makahiki hou :) xx
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December 17, 2021 at 12:56 PM
Enjoyed your verse Gary, I find Christmas time quite an emotional one as I look back at past Christmases and remember those no longer here, you brought back memories of the old coal fires and remember the coal men would sometimes come in for a cup of tea, looked like the black and white minstrals. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Radice Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 1:18 AM
Hi Tom..I remember the coalmen and also around the same time the binmen carrying those metal bins on their shoulder up the garden path and not leaving everything strewn at the front. Was it some other world back then? All the best and Cheers - Gary
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December 17, 2021 at 12:08 PM
This is so nice Gary, written in your unique flavour, ice inside the windowsill is a great line It sparks a memory of our old draughty wooden framed windows icing up, you’ve captured the Christmas spirit quiet brilliantly, cheers David
Radice Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 1:14 AM
Hi David. Thanks once again for your lovely comments. It's strange how certain memories stay with you from child to adult but they do don't they? :) All the best and Cheers Gary
Hankins Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 10:02 AM
Exquisite, IMHO. I loved the way it flowed from beginning to end with marvelous rhymes. Your theme is precious, to know that your greatest present was the presence of your mum and dad. I don't think I can remember but one Christmas with my dad. Just as well.....Good writing, my friend, as always!
Radice Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 1:10 AM
That's Milt! That's sad about your dad. If I'm totally honest I'm not happy how the poem finished. It needs work but as it's in a contest at the moment I'll have a go at a later time. Have a lovely Christmas Milt & best wishes Gary and Ann.
M  Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 3:55 AM
Gary…..both beautiful and sad. Love it! Debx
Radice Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Thanks Deb! Once again I'm behind on reading others' poems but will hopefully catch up over the next few days. Thanks again! Cheers - Gary
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