You,You,You

You, an Your caramelized, 
golden skin, deliciously 
fashionable, courses through 
me, No doubt, in style, Stalking 
crazy flows; or crazy poses, For
They are photogenically memorized 
In my mind, to unfold, your album 
among the pros, to #1, I see 
you clearly, with no fear 
against your foes, I verbally 
brag, wanting you, In the same 
quotes you speak, GOD only 
knows, from head- to- toes, 
which in scripts my soul, down 
to the heart of our children, I 
must bare, as we adore their 
love, and ours along side the 
almighty, because you are that life, 
I want in mine, for I won't ever 
let you be, So please marry me, me, me....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Posey Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 5:31 PM
Well structured poem using talent that most will envy.You leave no doubt as to your devotion. In an ally fight, I want you on my side... Deepest respect.... Jake
Sanderson Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 5:27 AM
Always have ur back jake thank you love big Carma xoxox
Palmer Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 7:36 AM
WONDERFUL WRITE CARMA,KEEP EM COMING LOL,THUMBS UP
Sanderson Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 8:37 AM
Thanks so much richie, for you, you, you, always, Lol love with an addiction,thumbs are up... Love ya big Carma
Cavanaugh Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 3:48 AM
Very expressive love poem. Right from the heart. Great work Carma.
Sanderson Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 8:33 AM
Thank You Jon, got a BIG heart, glad u agree, thanks again... Xoxox Carma
Ersal Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 11:39 PM
Pretty nice way of expressing!
Sanderson Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 12:54 AM
Thank You Junate
Fraser Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 11:37 PM
This is very good Carma, captured me from beginning to end, blessings, Carl
Sanderson Avatar
November 19, 2012 at 12:55 AM
Thank you much Carl
Harrell Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 7:36 PM
Beautiful write, Carma. I can feel your gentle, bare all heart. Love your write. It always takes me somewhere. Love ya, Toquyen
Sanderson Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 9:52 PM
Enjoy the RIDE Lol....
Sanderson Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 9:51 PM
Thank You Toquyen, will always take you to the clouds deep off to the unknown love ya always Carma
Falotico Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 5:27 PM
Very deep piece from a even deeper soul. I like the way you write. Michael
Sanderson Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 5:34 PM
Thanks so much Michael, I will keep them coming, love always Carma
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