You'Ve Got Mail

Forever etched within the meadows of my mind you stood silent in wait of me
amid the flowering Lithrope, snuggled deep beside ornamental irons, I did watch
only to find your eyes waver fearful a passerby may intrude upon your pounding heart 
I must be courageous in God's glorious garden or forever be hollow and set aside 

The sun and breeze kiss a Paulownia tree sending the leaves lovingly onto my path
crushing phlox and coneflowers beneath my feet I muster courage ambling forward
to meet the most beloved creature I've  ever beheld, the same I seek forgiveness from
" I love you please allow time to know me further than empty words on a screen"


Judy Konos
8/30/15
Sense of Touch contest
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Central Park Manhattan, New York City
Opened in 1857 on 778 acres
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 8, 2015 at 9:11 AM
Judy, Congrats on your sense of touch win. **SKAT**
Konos Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 10:04 AM
Boot SKAT Boogie On.....Thanks.
Dietrich Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 9:13 PM
wow, Judy. AMazing. I had no idea you did such brilliant romantic writing!! Congrats on a well deserved win.
Konos Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 7:15 AM
Thank you Andrea and Happy reverse 06 Birthday
Puddifoot Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 2:52 PM
this is a really well written piece, vivid imagery, i like it a lot and i also like the film! congrats on your win in nette's contest :)
Konos Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 4:05 PM
thanks Charlotte....thanks a lot....
Inman Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Lovely write Judy.
Konos Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Thank you James....good to see ya here...
Roper Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 8:02 PM
Fabulous write, Judy, congratulations on your win a 7! Hugs Eve
Konos Avatar
September 7, 2015 at 7:49 AM
Thank you fabulous Eve, appreciate it!
Onclaud Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 12:40 PM
the feeling of being touched without touching.. how atmospheric, judy!... thanks for joining my contest as i greet you with my fine congrats!
Konos Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 2:22 PM
Tis I who thank you ....my very favorite Nette on Cloud 9
A. Sharma Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 8:04 AM
A creative n informative beauty Judy! Congrats on superb win!
Konos Avatar
September 6, 2015 at 8:25 AM
Thank you Upma
Callus Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 3:09 PM
This is creative, especially when comparing the title to the content of this poem, Judy! #7 Have to admit I had not heard of a Paulownia tree (in fact I looked it up); playing around with words: I, Paul, own a tree:) ~ paul
Konos Avatar
September 5, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Sounds like your leaves are flying around all over the place...and now I shall take my leave...thanks for stopping by....AND always good to hear from you especially now that you are a talking tree!
Chircop Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 6:02 PM
'I love you please allow time to know me further than empty words on a screen '... Yes I am touched by that line.. Such a beautiful poem Judy.
Konos Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 8:33 PM
Thank you Charmaine....very nice of you to say....
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 6:24 PM
I too enjoy the more personal touch. I think this should do well Judy!
Konos Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 6:42 PM
Thanks and meanwhile Richard, "“The whole purpose of places like Starbucks is for people with no decision-making ability whatsoever to make six decisions just to buy one cup of coffee'-Joe Fox
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 3:23 PM
Wow judy you pulled out all the stops with the imagery and a unique take on the theme - fabulous write good luck for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Konos Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 7:03 PM
Thank you Jan...
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