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You've Got Alot of Nerve

After shutting off the bedroom lights by closing my eyes; I see sparks of fireworks in my mind thinking synaptically. It's not in anyway a day to celebrate nor holiday, so making me more to think feeding with fuel thoughts forgotten, now done brought up from depths not sought; for caution when stepping on the edge of what's surely the deepest depths of my mind's sea. Seeing old ideas again, now as blind creatures that shine by bioluminosity; for we all shine on and on and on and on...

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Date: 3/12/2021 8:49:00 PM
Nice, interesting work, Marcela. I really enjoyed your images behind closed eyes, and I liked your rhyming with those huge words, like bioluminosity! Fine.
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Marcela Proust
Date: 3/13/2021 3:52:00 AM
Thank you very very much. Coming from you means quite alot. Thanks.