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You'Ve Been Chopped

fine tuned precision mandolin wheels slicers ect you've been chopped - goodbye Tribute To Fine Foods Entry For Matt Caliri's The Job Contest

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James Fraser

Date: 9/21/2009 3:56:00 PM

Nice Senyru Katherine, good luck in the Matt's contest>>James

John Freeman

Date: 9/21/2009 11:55:00 AM

Witty, my lady! Sincerely Moses

Brian Strand

Date: 9/17/2009 11:52:00 PM

Best wishes with this one Katherine.Rgds Brian.(You have soupmail)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/17/2009 7:15:00 AM

Nicely done. God speed in the contest. Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/14/2009 5:27:00 AM

fine tuned precision........rough and tumble woman...you go gal! Light & Love

Sue Mason

Date: 9/13/2009 1:07:00 PM

Very different write here, Katherine. The form is more like a Senryu which is about human things where a Haiku is about nature, but the 5/7/5 syllable line count is missing. There are 6 syllables in line #1, 7 in line #2 but I don't know what the last word is and, the last line is only 4 syllables. This is a very clever idea ... just needs a few changes ... smile ... Hope you don't mind my comments ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/13/2009 10:49:00 AM

Yummy, Katherine. Are you a chef? If so, please send some treats my way. I'm so busy unpacking after the move that I sometimes forget to eat. Now this poem has made me hungry and a simple grilled cheese sandwish awaits. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Date: 9/13/2009 10:45:00 AM

Got a chuckle out of the ending this one. Nice tribute--you can cook any time for me. Ha! Ha! Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing my friend. Thank you for your kind comment on my blog. Karen