You'Ve Been Chopped

fine tuned precision
mandolin wheels slicers ect
you've been chopped - goodbye




Tribute To Fine Foods


Entry For 
Matt Caliri's 
The Job Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 3:56 PM
Nice Senyru Katherine, good luck in the Matt's contest>>James
Freeman Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 11:55 AM
Witty, my lady! Sincerely Moses
Strand Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 11:52 PM
Best wishes with this one Katherine.Rgds Brian.(You have soupmail)
Kendrick Avatar
September 17, 2009 at 7:15 AM
Nicely done. God speed in the contest. Sara
Guzzi Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 5:27 AM
fine tuned precision........rough and tumble woman...you go gal! Light & Love
Mason Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 1:07 PM
Very different write here, Katherine. The form is more like a Senryu which is about human things where a Haiku is about nature, but the 5/7/5 syllable line count is missing. There are 6 syllables in line #1, 7 in line #2 but I don't know what the last word is and, the last line is only 4 syllables. This is a very clever idea ... just needs a few changes ... smile ... Hope you don't mind my comments ...
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September 13, 2009 at 10:49 AM
Yummy, Katherine. Are you a chef? If so, please send some treats my way. I'm so busy unpacking after the move that I sometimes forget to eat. Now this poem has made me hungry and a simple grilled cheese sandwish awaits. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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September 13, 2009 at 10:45 AM
Got a chuckle out of the ending this one. Nice tribute--you can cook any time for me. Ha! Ha! Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing my friend. Thank you for your kind comment on my blog. Karen
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