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You'Ve Been Chopped

fine tuned precision
mandolin wheels slicers ect
you've been chopped - goodbye




Tribute To Fine Foods


Entry For 
Matt Caliri's 
The Job Contest

Copyright © Katherine Stella | Year Posted 2009

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James Fraser Date: 9/21/2009 3:56:00 PM Nice Senyru Katherine, good luck in the Matt's contest>>James Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 9/21/2009 11:55:00 AM Witty, my lady! Sincerely Moses Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 9/17/2009 11:52:00 PM Best wishes with this one Katherine.Rgds Brian.(You have soupmail) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/17/2009 7:15:00 AM Nicely done. God speed in the contest. Sara Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/14/2009 5:27:00 AM fine tuned precision........rough and tumble woman...you go gal! Light & Love Login to Reply

Sue Mason Date: 9/13/2009 1:07:00 PM Very different write here, Katherine. The form is more like a Senryu which is about human things where a Haiku is about nature, but the 5/7/5 syllable line count is missing. There are 6 syllables in line #1, 7 in line #2 but I don't know what the last word is and, the last line is only 4 syllables. This is a very clever idea ... just needs a few changes ... smile ... Hope you don't mind my comments ... Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/13/2009 10:49:00 AM Yummy, Katherine. Are you a chef? If so, please send some treats my way. I'm so busy unpacking after the move that I sometimes forget to eat. Now this poem has made me hungry and a simple grilled cheese sandwish awaits. Great work! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Date: 9/13/2009 10:45:00 AM Got a chuckle out of the ending this one. Nice tribute--you can cook any time for me. Ha! Ha! Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing my friend. Thank you for your kind comment on my blog. Karen Login to Reply