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You'Ve Been Betrayed

"Come with me on a rousing escapade!" How temptingly he'd whispered in my ear. "My dear, I promise there's nothing to fear." How easily he'd managed to persuade me. Then secretively, his plans were laid. He'd spoken three words that seemed so sincere, "Come with me." Gendarme sirens sounded. It was a raid! Suddenly, his occupation was clear... A slave trader taking me to Tangier, I was rescued and told, "You've been betrayed. Come with me." October 14, 2022 Rousing Rondine Contest Sponsored by Jeff Kyser

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Date: 11/22/2022 6:39:00 PM
A chilling reality, superbly narrated Jenna ~ congratulations on your win. Reminds me of the movie ‘Taken’
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Date: 11/22/2022 7:26:00 AM
Interesting write Jenna. I like it! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 11/21/2022 7:14:00 PM
"A slave trader taking me to Tangier" - Intentions matter. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/21/2022 6:59:00 AM
Jenna, CONGRATS on your win with this excellent piece~~on such a timely topic! Janice
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/21/2022 2:11:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Janice.
Date: 11/21/2022 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations, a thought-provoking rondine.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/21/2022 2:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Terry.
Date: 11/21/2022 4:59:00 AM
Well done little story in a few lines. I enjoyed this one, Jenna, and did not guess this to be yours! Congrats on the 2nd place!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/21/2022 2:11:00 PM
Thanks for the honor, Jeff.
Date: 10/21/2022 2:18:00 AM
This is dynamic and chilling "A slave trader taking me to Tangier," OUCH!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/21/2022 4:53:00 AM
Thanks so much, Caren.
Date: 10/17/2022 5:19:00 AM
Evil can be powerfully persuasive as you poem so eloquently portrays Jenna!! Well done!! Happy Monday xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/17/2022 6:21:00 AM
Thank you for reading me and leaving your supportive comments, Mike. Happy Monday to you as well.
Date: 10/14/2022 10:50:00 AM
How sad Jenna that in this day and age there is still slavery all over the world even in the so called civilised nations. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 10/14/2022 10:56:00 AM
Nothing and nowhere is off limits to those who do as they please for money and power. It's despicable. Thanks, Tom.

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