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Youth

Youth, ah that most beautiful butterfly. . . evolving from chrysalis into the most delicate creature, flitting freely to and fro, alighting upon fragrant flowers that capture their eyes with vibrant colors. You don’t see them attracted to fading blooms. Most proclaim it is impossible to return to youth—yet I see the youth of my mother in my daughter’s sweet smiling face. If we are diligent, youth may become distilled in the mind, captured forever by memory and faded photographs now photo/shopped into their once brilliant shades of black and white!

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Date: 3/6/2017 7:53:00 AM
Comparing youth to a butterfly is very fitting, Connie. Though we cannot have the caterpillar - chrysalis - butterfly life cycle, you found a way round it by finding similarities between mother and daughter! #7 Regards // paul
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Date: 9/3/2010 12:37:00 AM
What a lovely way to recall the ever refreshing and rejuvenating word Youth and returning to it in an ever green manner. Great write my friend. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra.....Connie M Wong
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Date: 9/1/2010 1:19:00 AM
This sure made me smile Connie :) --wonderful way of capturing youth here-- :) thank you so much for all your wonderful comments in my poems btw-- I hope you are having a great week :) -- hugs nikko :)
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Date: 8/31/2010 10:46:00 PM
Connie, I want to thank you for seeing so many of my poems tonight. YOu are such a sweetheart, especially knowing how super busy you are! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/26/2010 10:06:00 PM
youth is the one image image we should never let fade away. nice write"
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Date: 8/25/2010 6:27:00 AM
lovely write...TAH
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Date: 8/24/2010 11:25:00 PM
A big FAV for this one, Connie!
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:33:00 PM
Beautiful feeling to this and so very true! This is lovely :) Thank you for a kind comment on my poem- very cool about Jan- I love her forms! Best wishes and blessings, Kris~
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Date: 8/23/2010 2:18:00 AM
sounds beautiful. & very sweet. a cute and lovely write, Connie.. thank you.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/23/2010 1:47:00 AM
Such a lovely Poem vibrating with the energy of Youth, while keeping alive the hopes in the eyes of your daughter. A brilliant piece of writing my friend. And many thanks for your kind and precious comments on my Poem Just keep the hopes always alive. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....Marcum Wong.
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Date: 8/22/2010 9:15:00 PM
Connie a beautiful write to start my day with.. I'm also glad I could make you smile while reading "melt away" hope you'll enjoy your day :) Wilma
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Date: 8/22/2010 10:18:00 AM
Smile ~ You know, I have been viewing amid other things? Some extremely gifted and beautiful poetry as of late and, the gentle thoughts and images amid "This Treasure Here," is right up there at the top with them all; "Extremely Beautiful Connie; A Fave" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Dear, Amid The Timeless Eyes of Those You Love;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/22/2010 10:11:00 AM
Smile ~ "Wow, sooo extremely lovely and beautiful ~ "Butterflies....'Alighting upon fragrant flowers that capture their eyes with vibrant colours.'" ~ What a wonderful comparison, the gentle image of soft and pretty butterflies to that of a precious child ~ "Hello Dear Gifted & Lovely Connie Marcum Wong!!!" ~ I wish to "Thank You" for "Your" kind com yesterday and, it was good to see "Your Preciousness" again dear lady ~ ....Cont:)
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Date: 8/22/2010 5:25:00 AM
A beautiful write, and as I read more of your work your talent just pours out...Thank you for your sweet comment... Always Michael
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Date: 8/22/2010 1:20:00 AM
soup mail
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Date: 8/21/2010 9:32:00 PM
Sweet and lovely Connie.. such a pleasure to read u on my wedding day.. I have posted our wedding vows on poetry list and blog for all poets to enjoy and share in my happiness today..luv..ciao..
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Date: 8/21/2010 7:57:00 PM
Beautiful and original poem here, dear Connie. Thanks for your comment on my "Soon". Are you in Hawaii??? :)
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Date: 8/21/2010 7:26:00 PM
Brilliant, Connie! I am so glad I stoped to read your wonderful creative poem. A very lovely way to end my day. Have a wonderful one*LUV~ Skat
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:53:00 PM
Very interesting and enjoyable write, Connie
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:04:00 PM
that was beautiful
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:01:00 PM
lovelly x sarah
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Date: 8/21/2010 5:36:00 PM
Pictures do capture fleeting exterior beauty, Connie. It must be wonderful to see your mother's image in your daughter's face. How lucky you are! But I do believe there is a beauty that accompanies every age, and I'm not only talking about the inner beauty. Marveled at the imagery of the butterfly emerging gloriously from the chrysalis. Excellent use of the free verse style! Love, Carolyn
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