Youth

Youth, ah that most beautiful butterfly. . .
evolving from chrysalis into the most
delicate creature, flitting freely to and fro,
alighting upon fragrant flowers that
capture their eyes with vibrant colors.
You don’t see them attracted to fading blooms.
Most proclaim it is impossible to return to 
youth—yet I see the youth of my mother 
in my daughter’s sweet smiling face.
If we are diligent, youth may become distilled 
in the mind, captured forever by memory and
faded photographs now photo/shopped into
their once brilliant shades of black and white!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Callus Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 7:53 AM
Comparing youth to a butterfly is very fitting, Connie. Though we cannot have the caterpillar - chrysalis - butterfly life cycle, you found a way round it by finding similarities between mother and daughter! #7 Regards // paul
Kapoor Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 12:37 AM
What a lovely way to recall the ever refreshing and rejuvenating word Youth and returning to it in an ever green manner. Great write my friend. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra.....Connie M Wong
K. Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 1:19 AM
This sure made me smile Connie :) --wonderful way of capturing youth here-- :) thank you so much for all your wonderful comments in my poems btw-- I hope you are having a great week :) -- hugs nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 31, 2010 at 10:46 PM
Connie, I want to thank you for seeing so many of my poems tonight. YOu are such a sweetheart, especially knowing how super busy you are! LUv, Andrea
D. Avatar
August 26, 2010 at 10:06 PM
youth is the one image image we should never let fade away. nice write"
Hill Avatar
August 25, 2010 at 6:27 AM
lovely write...TAH
Dietrich Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 11:25 PM
A big FAV for this one, Connie!
Walters Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 6:33 PM
Beautiful feeling to this and so very true! This is lovely :) Thank you for a kind comment on my poem- very cool about Jan- I love her forms! Best wishes and blessings, Kris~
Chachere Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 2:18 AM
sounds beautiful. & very sweet. a cute and lovely write, Connie.. thank you.(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
Kapoor Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 1:47 AM
Such a lovely Poem vibrating with the energy of Youth, while keeping alive the hopes in the eyes of your daughter. A brilliant piece of writing my friend. And many thanks for your kind and precious comments on my Poem Just keep the hopes always alive. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra....Marcum Wong.
Neels Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 9:15 PM
Connie a beautiful write to start my day with.. I'm also glad I could make you smile while reading "melt away" hope you'll enjoy your day :) Wilma
Rhinem Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 10:18 AM
Smile ~ You know, I have been viewing amid other things? Some extremely gifted and beautiful poetry as of late and, the gentle thoughts and images amid "This Treasure Here," is right up there at the top with them all; "Extremely Beautiful Connie; A Fave" ~ "My Love & Warmth to You Always &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day Dear, Amid The Timeless Eyes of Those You Love;" Bye!:) ~
Rhinem Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 10:11 AM
Smile ~ "Wow, sooo extremely lovely and beautiful ~ "Butterflies....'Alighting upon fragrant flowers that capture their eyes with vibrant colours.'" ~ What a wonderful comparison, the gentle image of soft and pretty butterflies to that of a precious child ~ "Hello Dear Gifted & Lovely Connie Marcum Wong!!!" ~ I wish to "Thank You" for "Your" kind com yesterday and, it was good to see "Your Preciousness" again dear lady ~ ....Cont:)
Falotico Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 5:25 AM
A beautiful write, and as I read more of your work your talent just pours out...Thank you for your sweet comment... Always Michael
Scripca Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 1:20 AM
soup mail
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 9:32 PM
Sweet and lovely Connie.. such a pleasure to read u on my wedding day.. I have posted our wedding vows on poetry list and blog for all poets to enjoy and share in my happiness today..luv..ciao..
Scripca Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:57 PM
Beautiful and original poem here, dear Connie. Thanks for your comment on my "Soon". Are you in Hawaii??? :)
A  Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:26 PM
Brilliant, Connie! I am so glad I stoped to read your wonderful creative poem. A very lovely way to end my day. Have a wonderful one*LUV~ Skat
Mehta Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:53 PM
Very interesting and enjoyable write, Connie
Roberts Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:04 PM
that was beautiful
Hales Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:01 PM
lovelly x sarah
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August 21, 2010 at 5:36 PM
Pictures do capture fleeting exterior beauty, Connie. It must be wonderful to see your mother's image in your daughter's face. How lucky you are! But I do believe there is a beauty that accompanies every age, and I'm not only talking about the inner beauty. Marveled at the imagery of the butterfly emerging gloriously from the chrysalis. Excellent use of the free verse style! Love, Carolyn
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