Brian Sambourne Poet Acrostic

Youth

Yearling struts its liberty in unstinting energy
Oblivious to reserve that shoes a gallop with dullness
Unaware of regret's stable and the binaries of age
Trotting between indolence and indulgence
Hot-blooded youth that knows the sway of vigor in
                                  every race, instinctive
                                  right out of the gate







Acrostic composed May 5/2023

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Sotto Poet May 11, 2023 at 1:16 PM Your poetry "Youth" is fantastic. From the first Verse to the last, I was engrossed. I am happy for you that you won. Brian Sambourne May 11, 2023 at 1:36 PM Thank you, Lassad. I wasn't sure if the bridge connection from foal yearling to human youth would carry well. My appreciation for your vote of confidence. Be well. Brian

Paula Goldsmith May 11, 2023 at 9:37 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/Acrostic write again. Have a great/blessed day writing away.................. Brian Sambourne May 11, 2023 at 11:27 AM Thank you Paula. Most gracious of you to acknowledge my placement. Acrostic writes are not always well received. Best wishes, Brian

Constance La France May 11, 2023 at 7:13 AM Brian, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. ! Brian Sambourne May 11, 2023 at 11:30 AM Greetings Constance, My appreciation for the recognition. Such a fine list of topics to choose from. Cheers, Brian

Paula Goldsmith May 5, 2023 at 9:04 AM Your "Youth" is a wonderful write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day/weekend......... Brian Sambourne May 5, 2023 at 10:55 AM Many thanks for your supportive words. I hope that you are keeping well. Sincerely, Brian