Youth

Yearling struts its liberty in unstinting energy Oblivious to reserve that shoes a gallop with dullness Unaware of regret's stable and the binaries of age Trotting between indolence and indulgence Hot-blooded youth that knows the sway of vigor in every race, instinctive right out of the gate Acrostic composed May 5/2023

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Sotto Poet

Date: 5/11/2023 1:16:00 PM

Your poetry "Youth" is fantastic. From the first Verse to the last, I was engrossed. I am happy for you that you won.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/11/2023 1:36:00 PM

Thank you, Lassad. I wasn't sure if the bridge connection from foal yearling to human youth would carry well. My appreciation for your vote of confidence. Be well. Brian

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/11/2023 9:37:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/Acrostic write again. Have a great/blessed day writing away..................

Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/11/2023 11:27:00 AM

Thank you Paula. Most gracious of you to acknowledge my placement. Acrostic writes are not always well received. Best wishes, Brian

Constance La France

Date: 5/11/2023 7:13:00 AM

Brian, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. !

Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/11/2023 11:30:00 AM

Greetings Constance, My appreciation for the recognition. Such a fine list of topics to choose from. Cheers, Brian

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/5/2023 9:04:00 AM

Your "Youth" is a wonderful write. Good Luck. Have a blessed day/weekend.........

Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/5/2023 10:55:00 AM

Many thanks for your supportive words. I hope that you are keeping well. Sincerely, Brian