Youth

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I didn't know 
          that I'm the first
I didn't know
          you were coerced
I didn't know
          your every verse
I didn't know
          they were rehearsed
I didn't know
          the truth at first

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/29/2019 1:49:00 PM

Love it! Brief but speaks!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/29/2019 1:53:00 PM

I found it to be true, they tell all their friends, Aloha William