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Your's Truly

Your smiles-gone, from past setbacks Use my candle and melt my wax To fill the holes in all your cracks Your hopes of dim, Re; loss of trust Use my polish of magic trust To blanket your hardship's- layered crust Your closing eyes of tears- In weep Use my love to soak in deep... Into your heart, for you to keep Your hope for life and world of dreams Use my lotions, potions; happy creams My moisturizer's to mend your seams Your open wounds of scar, you bare Use my blood of blue I share My darling, for it is you...for most, I care Your sadness breaks my heart to bleed Use my oil and mill my seed My healing powers are all you need' Ref. Line from Maria Williams *Use my oils and mill my seed My healing powers are all you need' Poetic Lines From Maria Williams Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One 2/15/202

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Maria Williams

Date: 3/26/2020 8:37:00 AM

You did me proud Charlie, that was a hard line to use. I was wondering how it would pan out. Looks like you were the only one to use it. Way to go. Congratulations on your wondrous poem my dear friend. Take care and stay safe...Maria Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 3/25/2020 11:09:00 PM

Charles,great written poem from the one line and a big congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest-Stay safe and healthy my friend. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/25/2020 2:29:00 PM

- I really like this ... :) - Your healing powers are all we need ... use it wisely, my friend :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Stay healthy and safe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina
Date: 3/25/2020 7:17:00 PM

Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. I will do that (lol) Stay well my very dear friend. Hugs // Charlie :)

Silent One

Date: 3/25/2020 6:03:00 AM

so far, I think you are the only one who used this line....great last stanza, thats the kind of love and support a person needs.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Charles Messina
Date: 3/25/2020 7:20:00 PM

It's always an honor to win, place or show in your wonderful contests. Thank you very much, S.O. Praying for your good health and safety. All the best, Charlie

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/2/2020 9:50:00 AM

You did this really well. I can feel the embalming love with your creative imagery.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/27/2020 2:47:00 PM

I love the imagery in this, the feel of each line delivers an imaginative and poetically stimulating kick that appeals to me. It's like poetry and off the wall blend to create passionate lines. BUT, I'm confused about Verse now; to rhyme or not to rhyme for your contest? Yes, I'm asking but that not why I commented that is because I read your poem and serious like the punch it extends throughout. Poetry hugs ... CayCay (really am confused if you've time to Soup Mail me & meter - does verse?)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/26/2020 6:04:00 PM

Hi Charlie, An unusual poem but as usual, riveting and immensely enjoyable. I wish you well in the contest my friend. Blessings and best wishes, Jennifer.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 2/25/2020 11:45:00 PM

charles, Well that is a fine how do you do. Wrecking the brain with such fine polish and potent wine. Well done. A Fave. -Richard

Charles Messina
Date: 2/26/2020 6:25:00 AM

Richard, thank you for a well polished compliment such as yours, and with the fine wine...I toast to your friendship. Thanks also for faving this! -Charlie

Winged Warrior

Date: 2/25/2020 7:56:00 PM

Bravo! my friend...Silent One & Maria will be proud...I know I am, brother Charlie...all the best from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)

Maria Williams
Date: 3/26/2020 8:41:00 AM

Thank you John, yes Charlie did very well. I hope you and your lovely family are keeping well. Take care and stay safe my dear friend....Maria Hugs

Charles Messina
Date: 2/26/2020 6:28:00 AM

WINGSTER! Great to see you, brother. SO and Maria are such wonderful and very talented poets. Love 'em both...and you too my friend. Thanks so Much! ^CM^ :o)

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 2/25/2020 2:54:00 PM

WHOA...I really like this. Vjckie

Charles Messina
Date: 2/26/2020 6:29:00 AM

Hi Vickie, thank you so much for your recent visits. I really appreciate you :) Hugs Charlie