Charles Messina Poet Verse

Your's Truly

Your smiles-gone, from past setbacks
 Use my candle and melt my wax 
To fill the holes in all your cracks 

Your hopes of dim, Re; loss of trust 
Use my polish of magic trust 
To blanket your hardship's- layered crust 

Your closing eyes of tears- In weep 
Use my love to soak in deep...
Into your heart, for you to keep 

Your hope for life and world of dreams 
Use my lotions, potions; happy creams 
My moisturizer's to mend your seams 

Your open wounds of scar, you bare 
Use my blood of blue I share 
My darling, for it is you...for most, I care 

Your sadness breaks my heart to bleed 
Use my oil and mill my seed 
My healing powers are all you need'

 

Ref. Line from Maria Williams
*Use my oils and mill my seed 
My healing powers are all you need' 
Poetic Lines From Maria Williams Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Silent One 
2/15/202

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Maria Williams March 26, 2020 at 8:37 AM You did me proud Charlie, that was a hard line to use. I was wondering how it would pan out. Looks like you were the only one to use it. Way to go. Congratulations on your wondrous poem my dear friend. Take care and stay safe...Maria Hugs

Eve Roper March 25, 2020 at 11:09 PM Charles,great written poem from the one line and a big congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest-Stay safe and healthy my friend. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2020 at 2:29 PM - I really like this ... :) - Your healing powers are all we need ... use it wisely, my friend :) - Congratulations on your win :) - Stay healthy and safe :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Charles Messina March 25, 2020 at 7:17 PM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise. I will do that (lol) Stay well my very dear friend. Hugs // Charlie :)

Silent One March 25, 2020 at 6:03 AM so far, I think you are the only one who used this line....great last stanza, thats the kind of love and support a person needs.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Charles Messina March 25, 2020 at 7:20 PM It's always an honor to win, place or show in your wonderful contests. Thank you very much, S.O. Praying for your good health and safety. All the best, Charlie

Juliet Ligon March 2, 2020 at 9:50 AM You did this really well. I can feel the embalming love with your creative imagery.

CayCay Godwin February 27, 2020 at 2:47 PM I love the imagery in this, the feel of each line delivers an imaginative and poetically stimulating kick that appeals to me. It's like poetry and off the wall blend to create passionate lines. BUT, I'm confused about Verse now; to rhyme or not to rhyme for your contest? Yes, I'm asking but that not why I commented that is because I read your poem and serious like the punch it extends throughout. Poetry hugs ... CayCay (really am confused if you've time to Soup Mail me & meter - does verse?)

Jennifer Proxenos February 26, 2020 at 6:04 PM Hi Charlie, An unusual poem but as usual, riveting and immensely enjoyable. I wish you well in the contest my friend. Blessings and best wishes, Jennifer.

Quoth Theraven February 25, 2020 at 11:45 PM charles, Well that is a fine how do you do. Wrecking the brain with such fine polish and potent wine. Well done. A Fave. -Richard Charles Messina February 26, 2020 at 6:25 AM Richard, thank you for a well polished compliment such as yours, and with the fine wine...I toast to your friendship. Thanks also for faving this! -Charlie

Winged Warrior February 25, 2020 at 7:56 PM Bravo! my friend...Silent One & Maria will be proud...I know I am, brother Charlie...all the best from the Wingster...^WW^ :o) Maria Williams March 26, 2020 at 8:41 AM Thank you John, yes Charlie did very well. I hope you and your lovely family are keeping well. Take care and stay safe my dear friend....Maria Hugs Charles Messina February 26, 2020 at 6:28 AM WINGSTER! Great to see you, brother. SO and Maria are such wonderful and very talented poets. Love 'em both...and you too my friend. Thanks so Much! ^CM^ :o)

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer February 25, 2020 at 2:54 PM WHOA...I really like this. Vjckie Charles Messina February 26, 2020 at 6:29 AM Hi Vickie, thank you so much for your recent visits. I really appreciate you :) Hugs Charlie