You're the 1-4 Me

Sitting on a lonely beach
Staring out to sea 
Dreaming of two people
One of them is me
The other is a bluebird 
And she's the cat's meow 
Waiting for that someday 
I wish it could be now
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rolland Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 6:03 PM
very nice, i like company of birds yann
Bigote Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 8:09 PM
Thank you very much
Craig Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 9:49 AM
This poem as well as the others I have read of yours's are quite good short and to the point. The way a poem should be.
Bigote Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 8:08 PM
Thank you
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