You'Re Stunning Smiles

You're a film star 
to these crazy naked
Irish eyes Smiling, in that forever
beautiful sings out sweetly you

Take that walk with me and see
praying to give you paradise of dreams
Leaving a golden warm smile
wrapped up softly under you're pillow

To touch in the gentleness of an angel's hand 
purity touching never ending bliss
Dancing insides intoxicated with the spirits
lighting up a star trailing in the wish of vision

One prays in the happiness
magically granting dreams wishes
whisked away enchanting dancing souls
sprinkling upon a sea of air
rainbow mists bouquets color 
your beauty complete
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dunn Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 8:47 AM
A excellent and radiant work of passion, and love nicely done, cheir
Mcdaid Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 9:40 AM
thank you so kindly cherl i wrote this one with my heart and soul wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 7:20 PM
What an imagery you drew here...:) I love your last stanza best!!!i find it hard to write free verse poems but as I read yours you do it with so much ease..:)
Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 7:22 PM
aah olive truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated thank you ever so kindly bless you
Espinola Collins Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:20 AM
This poem oozes with romance...beautiful write...I enjoyed the read Liam :) Ana
Mcdaid Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:33 AM
thank you so kindly anna brought a smile to my face wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 10:39 PM
Bright and romantic, like a beautiful bouquet!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:20 AM
andrea always a pleasure you beautiful comments dear friend heartfelt appreciated
Torres Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 7:45 PM
all set beautifully.... wonderful write here... ^_^
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:19 AM
alyah thank you kindly for such a beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Christensen Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 7:34 PM
Hi Liam, Very romantic piece this. Nice colourful images too. Quite lovely!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:17 AM
thank you so kindly truly very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
Bateman Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 6:52 PM
Liam . . . A very compelling, beautiful write here. Enchanting and immediately romantic. I enjoyed it very much. I like too: " . . . these crazy naked Irish eyes Smiling, . . ." The imagery you use in this particular poem tells its own story. Best Wishes, Gary (I've marked you as one of my FAV Poets!!)
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:15 AM
such humbling beautiful words gary just touched so deeply thank you with the kindest heart bless
Chircop Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 6:21 PM
Rainbow mists bouquets colour ,your beauty complete' What an enchanting verse..So beaitifully penned Liam .
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:13 AM
ah charmaine dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Yvonne Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 4:43 PM
A beautiful romantic write. I loved it.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 4:52 PM
thank you maurice kindly smiling this was a special write for me dug deep in this one
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