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You're a film star to these crazy naked Irish eyes Smiling, in that forever beautiful sings out sweetly you Take that walk with me and see praying to give you paradise of dreams Leaving a golden warm smile wrapped up softly under you're pillow To touch in the gentleness of an angel's hand purity touching never ending bliss Dancing insides intoxicated with the spirits lighting up a star trailing in the wish of vision One prays in the happiness magically granting dreams wishes whisked away enchanting dancing souls sprinkling upon a sea of air rainbow mists bouquets color your beauty complete

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Date: 10/26/2014 8:47:00 AM
A excellent and radiant work of passion, and love nicely done, cheir
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/26/2014 9:40:00 AM
thank you so kindly cherl i wrote this one with my heart and soul wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend
Date: 9/29/2014 7:20:00 PM
What an imagery you drew here...:) I love your last stanza best!!!i find it hard to write free verse poems but as I read yours you do it with so much ease..:)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2014 7:22:00 PM
aah olive truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated thank you ever so kindly bless you
Date: 9/27/2014 8:20:00 AM
This poem oozes with romance...beautiful write...I enjoyed the read Liam :) Ana
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/27/2014 8:33:00 AM
thank you so kindly anna brought a smile to my face wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/25/2014 10:39:00 PM
Bright and romantic, like a beautiful bouquet!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 1:20:00 AM
andrea always a pleasure you beautiful comments dear friend heartfelt appreciated
Date: 9/25/2014 7:45:00 PM
all set beautifully.... wonderful write here... ^_^
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 1:19:00 AM
alyah thank you kindly for such a beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 9/25/2014 7:34:00 PM
Hi Liam, Very romantic piece this. Nice colourful images too. Quite lovely!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 1:17:00 AM
thank you so kindly truly very beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 9/25/2014 6:52:00 PM
Liam . . . A very compelling, beautiful write here. Enchanting and immediately romantic. I enjoyed it very much. I like too: " . . . these crazy naked Irish eyes Smiling, . . ." The imagery you use in this particular poem tells its own story. Best Wishes, Gary (I've marked you as one of my FAV Poets!!)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 1:15:00 AM
such humbling beautiful words gary just touched so deeply thank you with the kindest heart bless
Date: 9/25/2014 6:21:00 PM
Rainbow mists bouquets colour ,your beauty complete' What an enchanting verse..So beaitifully penned Liam .
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 1:13:00 AM
ah charmaine dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Date: 9/25/2014 4:43:00 PM
A beautiful romantic write. I loved it.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/25/2014 4:52:00 PM
thank you maurice kindly smiling this was a special write for me dug deep in this one

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