Reagan Mann Poet I do not know?

You'Re Right

I told you i loved you,
I sold you a lie.
I needed and bleeded you
into "my guy."

I matched us and hatched us
a life we could lead,
I wrote us a story you'd
beg just to read.

I hated and rated
your touch from the start.
Inside always plotting
and roting your heart.

I told you i'm sorry,
Sung songs of regret.
I cried when i left you,
the scene had been set.

I lived next beside you,
Shared bodies and bed.
All the while meaning to mess 
with your head.

I promised you laughter,
but meant many tears.
I took all your secrets,
recreated your fears.

I told you I loved you,
I meant every word.
What you think of me-
 this crap is absurd.

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 2, 2011 at 5:18 AM I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Reagan. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit February 27, 2011 at 9:39 PM Good wording and rhyming. Check the last line in your third verse: the word "roting" should be correctly spelled "rotting". This is a good poetic description of a love-hate relationship.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 27, 2011 at 7:49 PM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out our contests too....