Imran Islam Poet Rhyme

You'Re Amazing

You're a message from heaven
and the waves on the ocean.
Your eyes are so lovely
your smile is so happy.
Don't compare yourself to others
Sweetie, you're like a queen.

Your heart is very young
and voice is a sweet birdsong.
Your mind is like the sky
Yeah, you are so shy.
Don't compare yourself to others
Sweetie, you're the moonshine.

I want your happiness
I want your goodness
Oh, don't be sad ever
Please smile forever!
Don't compare yourself to others
Sweetie, you're just amazing.

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Thomas Wells July 13, 2020 at 2:30 AM "Your mind is like the sky..." Good line. Finding love brings one to life and your poem expresses that very well! Have a great day, Lure. Imran Islam July 23, 2020 at 3:30 AM Thank you so much for your beautiful comments. God bless!

Richard Lamoureux June 26, 2020 at 10:28 AM I enjoyed this missive of love. A brilliant first poem. Welcome to the soup. Blessings Rick. Imran Islam June 30, 2020 at 6:48 PM Richard, thank you so much for your beautiful comments.

David Smith June 23, 2020 at 1:08 AM You know you created something special with this one. Look forward to reading more. the way you incorporated your message into the poem without ruining it was great. Best regards David in NZ Imran Islam June 30, 2020 at 6:52 PM Thank you so much for your bold and beautiful comments. Stay safe!

Frances Schiavina May 22, 2020 at 4:27 PM Absolutely beautiful poem from a heart in love. Well written! Imran Islam May 22, 2020 at 10:36 PM Thanks for your comments. Stay safe, God bless you.