Bryn Strudwick Poet Tanka

Your World

>center>YOUR WORLD

If you would let me
Come into your private world
And have me share it,
I’d only want a corner.
Please tell me you can spare it

22th February 2020
Let The Pens Flow Tanka contest
Sponsor Jenish Somadas

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Eve Roper February 25, 2020 at 9:53 PM Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2020 at 12:45 PM - Just a small corner is not much to ask for ... lovely written, Bryn :) - Congratulations on your win :) - //Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas February 25, 2020 at 9:50 AM Wonderful way to ask a corner of mind.. Great win Bryn

Darlene De Beaulieu February 24, 2020 at 1:29 PM Helllo Bryn Strudwick, this a romantic tanka poem. Have a nice day my friend.