Your Words

Stunned, in utter dismay
Mouth agape,
my world just went gray.
Your words
just tore my universe apart
Ripped out every chamber of my heart.

A. Green

angstrhyme

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Edward Orozco

May 25, 2010 at 10:35 PM

beautiful i love it

Constance La France

May 25, 2010 at 8:12 PM

Oh, this is so powerful.. what a wonderful write.. this has happened to me.. and just like you have written.. ripped out every chamber of my heart..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 25, 2010 at 8:00 PM

Awesome and words are so powerful and once spoken can never be retrieved again.. the hurt is forever said... enjoyed your creative write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

May 22, 2010 at 9:37 AM

Words are very powerful, indeed, Amy! They have the power to uplift and the power to destroy. They can bring joy or absolute devastation. I'm sorry you experienced the latter. Hope you are ok. Thanks for sharing this which was really well done by the way. Very expressive. Best wishes, Caroline.