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Stunned, in utter dismay Mouth agape, my world just went gray. Your words just tore my universe apart Ripped out every chamber of my heart. A. Green

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/25/2010 10:35:00 PM
beautiful i love it
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:12:00 PM
Oh, this is so powerful.. what a wonderful write.. this has happened to me.. and just like you have written.. ripped out every chamber of my heart..
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:00:00 PM
Awesome and words are so powerful and once spoken can never be retrieved again.. the hurt is forever said... enjoyed your creative write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/22/2010 9:37:00 AM
Words are very powerful, indeed, Amy! They have the power to uplift and the power to destroy. They can bring joy or absolute devastation. I'm sorry you experienced the latter. Hope you are ok. Thanks for sharing this which was really well done by the way. Very expressive. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 5/22/2010 8:45:00 AM
So sad and expressive, Amy. I hope you feel better.
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:24:00 PM
What a nice expression with fine imagery
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Date: 5/21/2010 3:49:00 PM
Ouch! Who could have said such things to our nice Amy Green? Love, daver
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Date: 5/21/2010 1:46:00 PM
Very profound Amy. If for a contest should do well. Charles
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Date: 5/21/2010 12:07:00 PM
wow...powerful write Amy... feel for you love
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