Your Watson

What do you think, as the pen is poised?
Is the thought already fully formed?
Ideas get tested before being employed
Many of which can be ignored

Sometimes the sounds make little sense
The intelligent audience will reject
Every other idea must be dispensed
Until all the logic is found perfect

Let the paper test all your doubt
Brevity of words makes clear the reward
Most everything else can be crossed out
What's left, highlighted and underscored
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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DiMino Avatar
September 27, 2026 at 9:23 PM
Indeed, many poems are spoiled by saying too much. The reader must be allowed to participate, fill in spaces with his or her own feelings, or the experience becomes a lecture...and I have hated those since childhood. Well said.
tenzenmen Avatar
September 29, 2026 at 9:06 PM
Thanks Joseph 👍
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