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All trees travel skyward All leaves seek to hug sun All flowers wish to emit scent I too crave for the crescent Whether sky or sun or crescent Of course all don’t deserve There is the order of high and low Dews smile at the jagged judgment Dews, those churned feelings from core Dews, those burned candles in dark Dews, those moments of light and dark Dews, those pains when you closed the door But dews are little moments trivial Very loose molecules unstable It’s beside the point if it smiles or frowns High trees laugh aloud skyward You wave your plaits and tweet Accept the truth bitter or sweet _______________________________________________________ July 4, 2016
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Marschall Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 3:11 AM
Nicely written poem - great free verse and beautiful wording
Gupta Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 5:51 AM
Thank you ...
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 2:59 PM
GREAT sentiment , Accept the truth bitter or sweet. Words for us all to live by, Probir!!
Gupta Avatar
July 7, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 7:31 AM
A well-developed poem from Alpha to Omega dear Probir!
Gupta Avatar
July 6, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Thank you... regards ... sorry for the delayed response ...
Roper Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Probir, this is very good work a 7. Thank you so very much for reading my poem “ We Will Drink Some Nectar Sweet”. Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 4:46 AM
Thank you so much Eve ... Love.
Onclaud Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 1:03 PM
probir, this reads like a beautiful hymn.. much enjoyed!..huggs
Gupta Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 4:46 AM
Thank you ...
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 7:52 AM
- Beautifully written - Wisely line in the final, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
July 5, 2016 at 4:47 AM
Thank you ...
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