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Your Touches

Your touches are subtle enough to make my heart race They draw me closer to you, I get lost in your embrace An eternal fire is burning way down deep inside If only in your arms, I could crawl into and hide To hear your heart beat deep inside your chest You are my safe foundation of happiness and rest The joy you bring me when your sweet face is near Allowing all my fear, worries, and troubles to disappear Worth more to me than anything, my most precious desire When I'm with you, nothing can get me any higher Your touches are welcome, they're all that I need When you're not near me, my heart so does bleed Leaving me hopeless, my world turns upside down I'm heartbroken and lonely when you aren't around Co-Written with Tim Smith

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/30/2014 10:11:00 AM
so very sweet beautifully painted piece bless you
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Date: 9/10/2014 9:23:00 AM
A great choice for POD.. Smooth and endearing message speaking on love and its gifts...
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Date: 9/9/2014 12:37:00 PM
to you I say congratulation, holding it back I cannot well done.
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Date: 9/9/2014 11:27:00 AM
Wow - you need to add collaboration with Tim Smith into the title - it if was POD i would have missed this stunning write! Well done guys its awesome:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/9/2014 8:15:00 PM
Thanks Jan...hugs Tim
Date: 9/9/2014 6:53:00 AM
Beautiful!!! I love it, well done both of you, a terrific dance, I applaud this treasure, grats for poem of the day :) :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/9/2014 8:26:00 AM
Thanks sweetie :)
Date: 9/9/2014 6:31:00 AM
Thank you everyone for all of the really heart warming comments :) You guys are the absolute best!
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Date: 9/9/2014 4:54:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS!!!! A great choice for poem of the day.
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/9/2014 8:28:00 AM
Let's write that one we talked about :)......thanks
Date: 9/9/2014 4:35:00 AM
Congratulations! A fantastic Sonnet full of sensitivity and romance, dear Chelsey! Well-deserved choice!
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Date: 9/9/2014 2:29:00 AM
Chelsey, this is an awesome write. Congratulations on being chosen as poem of the day. Verlena
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Date: 9/9/2014 1:28:00 AM
Wow this is awesome, i relate to this one big time guys. You should collaborate more often to feed our souls with food of this nature.
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/9/2014 8:16:00 PM
Thank you Bongani
Date: 9/7/2014 10:08:00 PM
I was like, is this Tim's sister? Then I saw, but wow, this is a great poem!!!!!
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/10/2014 4:10:00 PM
LOL....At least I'll have someone to drink with at the family parties....
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/10/2014 8:45:00 AM
Hi Tim, or shall I say Brother in Law !!!! LOL
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Chelsy Gonzales
Date: 9/9/2014 6:34:00 AM
Lol. I have his sisters number if you want it?... Shh!! ;)
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/7/2014 11:08:00 PM
Thanks Arthur....I do have sisters though.....stay away from them...lol
Date: 9/7/2014 8:04:00 PM
This turned out beautifully....Thanks for the dance...hugs Tim
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