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Your life is the full world, the stars, sun, and moon. On your own, you can fight the tough times real soon. Unsteady moves can't let you up the ladder; never tone down. Rarely will we meet; we set the lousy goal to impugn. Tacked and seated, man has doubts around his destiny. In the universe, all is set by its needs, not by inerrancy. Memories of agony and misery are not murky. Emotions disguise behind words, extort repay. Important to be happy, do what you love, and you will succeed. Share your calmness, work for success, and greater reward. Love the holiest stars; you will get a reverse welt. In the trials of life, sync up to the ethical dealt. Muttering stops; the sun has faded to that extent. If your core tilts to life, brave vitality, faith will last. Time is short; live the life of no one or precept. Enduring one's own goal, expect to aim too tight. During your life, believe yet not fall into the urge to defect. 3rd place winner

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Date: 4/8/2021 2:49:00 PM
Great write, Lasaad , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/8/2021 3:14:00 PM
Appreciate that, Eve, and thanks for reading and commenting; I wish you all the best.
Date: 4/8/2021 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement! I loved the lines "Important to be happy, do what you love, and you will succeed. Share your calmness, work for success, and greater reward." This is so very true!
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Date: 4/8/2021 3:05:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kelly, that's so nice of you; best wishes to you.
Date: 4/8/2021 12:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I love your line, "Important to be happy, do what you love, and you will succeed." So true but many do not. Have a blessed day..............................
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Date: 4/8/2021 1:34:00 PM
Thank you, Paula; I wasn't aware of the win, I'm so glad, and I appreciate you being the first one to congratulate me; I don't know why the sponsor doesn't even take care of that, have a blessed day
Date: 3/11/2021 12:58:00 PM
Excellent acrostic, Lasaab:-) Loved it!
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Date: 3/11/2021 2:25:00 PM
I enjoyed getting great feedback from a famous and talented Poet Mr. Edward. Thanks for reading and commenting, Actually you are one of my best poets that I unceasingly follow. Thank you so much, Edward.

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