Your Starlight Shining

I see your starlight shining.
With each smile, you light up more.
The night skies can’t resist you,
for your face they so adore.

I see your starlight shining.
Your eyes, like stars above,
are gracing me with sparkles
of your abounding love.

I see your starlight shining,
and others see it too.
Shine, my jewel, forever,
like stars in heaven do!


April 24, 2019
For 'A STRAND (1060)' Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Delaney Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 12:39 PM
Hi Andrea: Lovely anthem to shining. Congratulations. Hugs, SuZ
Ray Choudhury Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations, Dear Andrea. A beautiful. melodic piece.
Alex Avatar
January 27, 2022 at 11:57 PM
"Your eyes, like stars above" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Hamilton Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 9:10 AM
Congrats Andrea on a top shelf write, this is very melodic, I loved every word!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 6:09 AM
Lovely piece Andrea. Congrats
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 9:00 PM
Congratulations, Andrea. Great lyric.
May Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 2:02 PM
Lovely write Andrea, Congrats on a well deserved win..
Johnson Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 5:02 PM
Would love to hear this put to music. Would be a sweet little song. <3 :)
Goff Avatar
January 28, 2022 at 7:56 PM
Andrea, I listened to Honeymoon Serenade you wrote sung by Ryan Lucas, incredible!!!
Dietrich Avatar
May 4, 2019 at 6:55 PM
thanks, Robert. One day I'd love to hear my lyrics on the radio! I have a poem out there in the world that has been recorded by different bands but none of them are getting anywhere with it yet. The lyrics don't seem to matter to them because some of them do not even mention me in the notes. Ryan LUcas, a poet here long ago, put my Honeymoon Serenade poem to music and I think it's a very beautiful tune
Pandit Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 7:26 AM
I like the rhythm of your write..nicely done, Andrea.
Michael Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 5:58 AM
It's got that joyful feeling...A happy write indeed...
Rose  Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 5:38 AM
Ah, the whole page lit up as I read this Andrea, hope you win big, have a wonderful day love xo
Krutsinger Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 5:22 AM
Beautifully done, and congratulations on your film, Andrea. Bravo!
Goff Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 4:52 AM
Triumphant tribute Andrea, & congrats on your film!
Cunningham Avatar
April 25, 2019 at 2:16 AM
Nicely written Andrea, I have never attempted a lyric, yet. Good luck. Tom
Romios Avatar
April 24, 2019 at 11:57 PM
Just lovely! Panagiota
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